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If I Had You

If I had you, I would have been able to see every blind spot. If I had you, Flames of fire would have never felt so hot. If I had you, I would have never blossomed amongst nettle. If I had you, Streets of life would have never turned into a battle. If I had you, I would have never collected ashes. If I had you, I would have avoided all the bashes. If I had you I would have listened to all your stories And planted so well my territories If only I had you 1st Place in Late April Standard Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 4/25/2018 4:25:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work. Seems like that line was in a song long, long ago but I can't remember now what the song was. LOL..Congrats.
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Natasha Turner
Date: 4/25/2018 4:32:00 PM
It's what I've been through and endured dear Sara..my story, my pain, my song. Don't ever put an LOL on my pain..it's not poetic...it means you understood nothing about it..sorry!
Date: 4/24/2018 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A compelling poem.
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Natasha Turner
Date: 4/25/2018 12:13:00 AM
Thanks Susan :) :)
Date: 4/24/2018 7:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Natasha. Well done.
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Natasha Turner
Date: 4/25/2018 12:13:00 AM
Thanks Line :) :)

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