If I Dream

Daemons trespass across my soul,
When he'll leave I'll never know.
If I sleep before he wakes,
Perhaps my life shall be my own mistake.
Punishment shall be my own,
Not the daemons or his to own.
I shall heal with mountains climb,
Each foot step grim and gritty,
Hard but strong.
I walk this hill with each new breath, 
Dreaming with each pleasant step.
If he comes while I run,
Then I shall fly with the eagles call,
Up to heaven where loves for all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 4, 2010 at 3:12 PM
Lovely poetry Keira, a warm welcome to the Soup to you >> James
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2010 at 8:16 AM
May our Lord bless you and yours on this Easter Day Kiera. Love Carol and Family
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April 3, 2010 at 8:54 PM
Kiera This is absolutely beautiful and you have done an amazing job in portraying the inner strength within us that can conquer all if we just believe that nothing can be stronger then the almighty himself. Please have a wonderful Easter and thank you for your kind thoughts on my poem called (Is it really you)
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April 3, 2010 at 4:36 PM
nice writing ''''''
Guzzi Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 2:01 PM
interesting rework of a well loved prayer! Light & Love
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April 3, 2010 at 12:01 PM
an amazing poem hun welcome to poetry soup all the best in the future good luck xx
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