If I Don'T Make It Through the Night

Extreme pain and agony consumes me,
this state I'm in will soon ruin me;
though I want to live a long healthy life, 
I may not make it through the night.

The pressure constantly builds inside,
upon my face lies dried tears from my silent cries;
though I pray for things to be alright,
I may not make it through the night.

They say surgery is the answer,
or medicine is the cure;
somehow I know it's not that simple, 
to end this will take much more.

The fear is overwhelming,
when the time comes there's no place to hide.
I hope that I've accomplished,
all that I've had in mind.

I hope I've lived my life to the fullest, 
loved with all my heart,
and made things right;
if I don't make it through the night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Giroux Avatar
November 26, 2009 at 9:50 AM
great job on this one *faves*
Kendrick Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 7:24 AM
Very sad write. Is this about you or someone that you love? Keep your magical pen flowing. Sara
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