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If I Could Relive Yesterday

"Yesterday was a shimmering reflection on a lake. If you dwell upon what happened then, it will cause your heart to break." by poet. It seems like only yesterday when your skillful fingers stroked piano keys, now silent, laden with dust and mold. In mournful memories, a romantic vision of us still lingers, although love's symphony has dulled like tarnished gold. When we first fell in love, you wrote a song for me A score you busily worked on day and night to compose about the passion between an oak and a willow tree. Your lyrics sweet as the honeyed scent of a fragrant rose. Tender words on yellowed pages, now ripped and torn. No longer cherished by me, for they cause pain and grief, pricking me as though with the flower's sharpest thorn. From the loss of yesterday's passion, will I ever have relief? I continue to wilt, like the withering of a crimson rose whose leaves are crumbling on ivory keys while she dies. So like the aching wound in my heart that will not close, will the past keep tormenting me until my fatal demise? Will time erase memories of us? I fear they will not fade. Traces of you and our yesterdays will remain with me. They make me stagger as if cut by a knife, or a razor blade. If I could relive yesterdays, from your memory, I'd be free. Posted on November 30, 2021 for the "Y" Poetry Contest Hosted by Constance La France

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Date: 12/13/2021 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I understand. I heard someone say, get over it. What ever "it" is. I first thought just words. As I worked on "it," I was set free. Not easy but it did work for me. I wish I could hug you. Catch the hugs going your way. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 12/9/2021 1:53:00 PM
Lin, beautiful write and congratulations on your First place win in my "Y" Contest, New Poem and your quote is wonderful ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 12/3/2021 2:06:00 PM
Very lovely, Lin. We all have similar memories tucked away. Your poem made me shed some tears for passion that faded with years . Beautifully written. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/1/2021 9:01:00 AM
I can feel the hurt in your words Lin, if only you could erase those painful memories from your life. Tom I've been away for a few days, just playing catch up. Hope you're well.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/1/2021 12:28:00 PM
I'm glad your back, Tom, and hope it was a great get away. Thanks for your comments.
Date: 11/30/2021 6:04:00 PM
OMG, Lin. the timing of this was perfect. So sorry if life has turned another page for you. How fast, life changes. Today, I just found out that two of my dear friends had seperated. eleven years together...and Boom! just like that. life throws a curveball. Thanks for your recent visit...sending love, Charlie
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/1/2021 12:17:00 PM
Life turns a new page each day of our lives. I'm sorry to learn of your friends, Charlie, but their lives may be happier as individuals. It happens sometimes, it did for me. Thank you for your thoughts.

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