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If I Could Fly

If I could fly on Summer's breeze and leave behind my selfish pleas Glimpse Nature's handiwork supreme See the Earth in different themes, Nature's weave and magical tease. I'd sit at night on blossomed trees Watch Heaven's stars alight with ease then race a passing, bright moonbeam If I could fly... On fragrant breeze, find Summer's keys Open wings of lavender leaves No longer tied to worldly schemes Just Breeze and I to search for dreams Watch magic woven by degrees. If I could fly... April 17, 2022 for Your Favorite Theme Poetry Contest ~ Rondeau by Regina McIntosh SECOND PLACE PREMIUM!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/20/2022 6:31:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Ann Peck
Date: 5/31/2022 8:06:00 AM

Thank you, Beata. I appreciate your comments.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/13/2022 9:34:00 AM

Congratulations Ann. What a delightful poem of magical whimsy thinking about what we could see, do and appreciate if we could fly. Blessings on your flight!

Ann Peck
Date: 5/31/2022 8:05:00 AM

Thank you, Sam! How extraordinary it would be!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/13/2022 8:08:00 AM

Back with "Congratulations" on your win. A lovely write. Have a great/blessed day writing away................

Ann Peck
Date: 5/13/2022 8:49:00 AM

Dear Paula, Thank you again. You have a great day, too!

Terry Miller

Date: 5/13/2022 7:43:00 AM

Very well done, congratulations on your 2nd place.

Ann Peck
Date: 5/13/2022 8:47:00 AM

Thank you very much, Terry!

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 5/13/2022 5:58:00 AM

Hi Ann, Just popped back to say I knew this was a winner! Congratulations my friend. Your beautiful poem and hard work paid off :-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/12/2022 7:51:00 PM

A lovely write! My imagination flies! Congratulations, Ann, on second place trophy!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/12/2022 6:52:00 PM

Wow! Great! Congratulations!

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/12/2022 4:07:00 PM

'Tis an inspirational penning, Ann, my compliments indeed my friend, Aloha~William

Ann Peck
Date: 5/13/2022 8:46:00 AM

Oh, there's your name :) Thanks so much, William!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/12/2022 2:20:00 PM

I love the magical beauty of the night sky you portray here, Ann, I especially like the blossomed trees and lavender leaves, congratulations on your win!

Ann Peck
Date: 5/13/2022 8:45:00 AM

Thanks so much, Michelle! I kind of liked the lavender leaves too :)

Jeff Kyser

Date: 5/12/2022 12:49:00 PM

That's a rondeau there - very nice use of the refrain!

Ann Peck
Date: 5/12/2022 1:46:00 PM

Thanks, Jeff, for your comments!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/12/2022 12:08:00 PM

Wow. Amazing writing. I love this. Congrats. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Ann Peck
Date: 5/12/2022 1:48:00 PM

Gina, I'm very grateful for the honor! I sent you a soup mail. :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/5/2022 8:16:00 AM

"If I Could Fly" is a lovely write. Have a blessed day...........

Ann Peck
Date: 5/9/2022 5:20:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. A blessed day to you, too..

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 4/20/2022 8:06:00 PM

I could visualize myself sitting on a lovely blossom tree at night watching Heavens stars. This is absolutely lovely Ann and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. For me this is a winner and goes to my favs! Cheers my friend :-)

Ann Peck
Date: 4/21/2022 2:59:00 PM

Dear Anne, You're so very kind. You really cheer me up. I had a hard time learning how to write a Rondeau, for some reason. Now I see it's not that hard. Maybe I need more protein :) Take care!

Eric Cohen

Date: 4/20/2022 3:28:00 PM

You should publish this gem.

Ann Peck
Date: 4/21/2022 2:47:00 PM

Eric, You made my day! Thank you :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/19/2022 3:30:00 PM

I predict a WIN with this one. I think she really loves things connected to nature and God!! Also you wrote it very well.

Ann Peck
Date: 4/21/2022 2:46:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea! I had a really hard time learning how to write a Rondeau. When I finally got it, it wasn't that hard ~ duh.