If I Could Be Love

My last first kiss begs to brush across your thirsting lips   surrender with me to the night   to the way of the wind,   graceful in flight   dancing freely   out over a moonlit sea   glowing in glory   as we both now breathe     come put yours into mine   let pure warmth overcome   and burn your name   into the marrow of my soul     If I could be love,   I would be you     a port of protection   where the waters lie still   and hopeless has come to rest     feeling all your feels     my head nestled upon your chest   listening to your music   a heartbeat on fire   euphoric and filled with desire     If I could be love,   I would be you   and you could be me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Hamilton Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Congrats on Potd Tim, with this beauty!
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 1:30 AM
SO beautiful. I see it got POTD Congrats on a worthy honor.
Vaso Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 8:57 PM
I just came back to retract my first comment! You bumped me here,I am so upset!!!!! for sure I am sending you a BILL for that!!!! Cheers, and all kidding aside great poetry!!!!!
Ashley Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Returning with congratulations, Tim, for your well deserved recognition with POTD honors for your exquisite poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Gentile Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 7:21 PM
What a beautiful poem Tim, Congrats on POTD !!!
Peranteau Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 5:16 PM
Enthralling write dear poet ! ("If I could be love, I would just be "her's")< words to be soon written by yours truly, inspired by you dear poet....I pray you mind not???...*winks....Beautiful write Tim....Much love, james
Peranteau Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 5:21 PM
P.S...Bravo for the recognition with regard this wonderful write dear poet (((((claps)))))
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 3:38 PM
A great choice to be honored for POTD Tim. Congratulations! : )
Chircop Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Well Deserved Potd...My fave ever of yours Tim.Hw beautifully spelled-The word Love.If only we all couldbe love to eachother..Awesome!
Wood Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 1:29 PM
This is really pretty Tim. Great work!
Sands Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations for POTD Tim :)
Wanter Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 10:18 AM
Great writing, Tim, but then that's you. Congratulations.
Nicole Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 8:56 AM
Congratulations Tim, on Poem of the Day. : ) Brandy
Doll Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Great poem, Tim. Congratulations on POTD
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Yay! Back for POTD! Congratulations Tim :)) xomo!
Smith Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 6:40 AM
Lovely Tim, congratulations for POTD honors...
Gondolf Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 6:19 AM
What a beautiful romantic poem, Tim. Congrats on POTD. John
Warrior Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 5:03 AM
You are love, and your poem is lovely...Congrats!!! on your POTD! Tim...love & light...^WW^
Allison Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 4:41 AM
wtg Tim congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 4:07 AM
Congratulations on POTD Tim. You always do "love' so well. You are such a romantic. Well done, mate.
Wolf Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 2:58 AM
So gorgeous, Tim. So romantic. Congratulations on POTD, Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 2:22 AM
Very romantic verse Tim, congratulations on POTD. Tom
Ashley Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 7:24 PM
Your pen overflows with beautiful romance in the silky grace of your tender verses, Tim. An absolutely gorgeous creation. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Severo Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 5:16 PM
If only there was more men like you, I fell in love with this poem. peace and love xoxoxo Aurore
Green Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 11:29 AM
Romance seems to flow effortlessly from your pen Tim. Such a soft, beautiful and enchanting romantic poem.
Nicole Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 8:38 AM
And this is the way it should be, being one with love- being with the one you love. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy
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