If I Could - Collaboration With Chris Green

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If I could write a song for you My fingers start to see That eyes alone are not enough: I'd need your melody If I could waltz you in my arms My heart would thump with joy Inside a thousand butterflies Would find a lovesick boy If I could sing into your heart My voice would tell you so In lyrics of my endless love I’d never let you go If I could hold you tenderly Embrace you in romance No music would we ever need Through every step we dance If I could guide your feet to mine Your waist in my strong arm My mouth would sing against your lips A song so soft and warm If I could hear your lovely voice Sing around my soul In that melodic tone I know I'd feel happy and whole If I could do most anything With anyone at all I’d give myself to only you Within your heart I’d fall For this you see is now my dream If it would just come true I’d sing these words for all to hear I’m so in love with you *** February 3, 2017 Chris Green Darren White

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Date: 2/5/2017 10:38:00 AM
WoW! Darren, this is so beautiful and romantic. You and Chris penned a lovely collaboration. You guys are such talented poets. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Darren White
Date: 2/5/2017 10:46:00 AM
Oh Thank you Alexis for your wonderful compliment. I am so incredibly happy with and proud of this poem :)
Date: 2/5/2017 6:48:00 AM
this is a very nice piece keep it up guys :-)
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Darren White
Date: 2/5/2017 7:42:00 AM
Thank you, Kaiga :)
Date: 2/4/2017 2:57:00 PM
This is the epitome of love poems dear, Darren and dear Chris! What a collaboration! I feel so lucky you did it! A seven to each!
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Darren White
Date: 2/4/2017 2:59:00 PM
Thank you so much! I am so happy with this poem and with the 7 :)
Date: 2/4/2017 2:31:00 PM
I am in love with your words that's for sure.Well done guys..You're getting a favourite..I love it.
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Darren White
Date: 2/4/2017 2:35:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine! I feel honoured :)
Date: 2/4/2017 11:24:00 AM
You guys wrote an amazing poem... I so loved the lyric of it - <3
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Darren White
Date: 2/4/2017 11:49:00 AM
Thanks my dear friend <3
Date: 2/4/2017 8:09:00 AM
Utterly charming. One wonders who wrote what? In the end, it doesn't matter, it all comes together as a singular poem of love. JH
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Darren White
Date: 2/4/2017 8:12:00 AM
That's one of the best things. .. trying to write as one single poet :)
Date: 2/3/2017 10:46:00 PM
Wow!! This is excellent!!
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Darren White
Date: 2/4/2017 12:08:00 AM
Thanks Carol :)
Date: 2/3/2017 5:15:00 PM
I just knew you guys would hit it off! I've been looking forward to this poem, and I must say Bravo, to both of you on this wonderful romantic piece!
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Darren White
Date: 2/4/2017 12:05:00 AM
Yeah, we both like the poem very much, thanks Budgie :)
Date: 2/3/2017 8:03:00 AM
Seamless guys...A Beautiful love poem
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Darren White
Date: 2/3/2017 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Tim :) This was a delight to do. And I love the poem we wrote.
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