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If I Am Forgotten .... Wendy Read Me a Story

If I am forgotten
I want you to know


as the blinding light of summer
turns to fall, 
a shimmer,
daffodils turn to seed,
drifting on the breeze
I am walking to forget you


another part of me
runs eternity to forgive you,
once I was within 
thee a breath of life
binding our blood
your joy was my blessing
your sadness, shared


Anzac and incense
my sense of you, 
whenever the terror of night
grips me,
thoughts wander to safer times
sleeping back to back with you


bright red tartan splashes my memories
huddled in linen castles,
our torches held high
searchlights to adventure


you taught me to walk 
maybe even talk


and then one day you forgot me


if I am forgotten
I want you to know


far and wide my travels
have taken me walkabout,


but I never could forget you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/10/2010 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Jayne. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2010 4:47:00 AM
Congrats Jayne on having this poem selected in the first round competition in the P.S. contest luv.. good luck in the next phase ...
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Date: 9/2/2010 3:52:00 PM
deep write, congrats on the feature, enjoyed..P.D.
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Date: 8/30/2010 10:59:00 PM
Congratulations, Jayne on your featured poems for this week, so much adoring words to remember here. (^_^) Noel
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Date: 8/30/2010 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Jayne. Love, Carol
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