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If I leave, apart of me will vanish like the sight of distant mountains,when a blanket of fog passes by.If I leave my breath will to. I must stay even when adversity strikes. I must like what I dislike about you. Thus we become strong and last long, even when we argue until breath is short. If I leave, life is bland, my heat will be a barren land and broken into more pieces than sand of beach land. You know only the songs of my heart, so what music will heal you if I leave I will not leave you poetry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/19/2012 11:20:00 PM
Poetry my outlet, my release without which I forget to see or feel the world I live in and I am as a river dammed and only a trickle of my former self. You have just become my muse for today and I will post this poem a bit later. A well understood emotion here. Huggs TLee
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Date: 5/5/2012 5:25:00 PM
A poem , right!?! Well Done Elliott!! Well Done!! Very Deep and I like that!! :) Big Hugs, love deb...(ps line 6up from the bottom 8th word :) ? )
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Date: 5/5/2012 10:42:00 AM
Yes i like you to sweetheart ....; )
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Date: 5/5/2012 8:37:00 AM
I like your poems - I like you - I like you to stay - I like yours sunglasses - I like your comments - Do you like me :) :) :) :) - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/5/2012 6:29:00 AM
Elliott I should think not either..David
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