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If God Came To Me Calling-

If God Came to Me Calling… By Dane Smith-Johnsen I think that if I could talk to God And see Him face to face As long as we were introduced, I'd feel great joy inside. I would tell Him that I love Him. Then, sit in quiet peace. And listen to the words He'd say. Oh, that precious heavenly day. But if He came to me calling In the flesh out of the blue, I know that I'd be terrified. I wouldn't know what to do. Frozen, words would not flow. My mind boggled down with fears. Even though we've talked before Oh, prayers throughout the years. Yes, I had a million questions About the Universe and such. When sitting at the throne of God Mundane things don't matter much. In retrospect, my life on earth May not have been filled with cash. But through God's love and quiet walks, I learned of salvation well. Perfection might have been my goal. But disappointments crossed my way. As decisions that were not so wise Were made in rational disguise. Then, I'd see my Brother Sitting at Heavenly Father's side. I would remember His willing sacrifice. Oh, beloved hope, eternity with them. So, I'd bear my heart before them, And apologize once again. I'd thank them for forgiveness. Oh, the Sacrificial Lamb. And at the very moment that The Lord reached out His hand, My face would flush in quiet hush And I'd hug the both of them… Amen.

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Date: 10/24/2009 7:27:00 AM
Great poem Dane, easy to fill your shoes and pretend I am the one hugging the both of them, or anyone who reads this. Everyone has their own approach to God and as long as it is loving than there is no meaningful difference. We're all the same, seeking that same perfection. I feel you will find yours soon. -Yoni
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Date: 10/23/2009 7:35:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome comments Dane.Have a good weekend.Rgds brian
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Date: 10/23/2009 7:17:00 AM
Good job. Enjoyed the write and I sure that you have expressed the thoughts and feelings of many people here. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/20/2009 2:22:00 PM
your poem made me ponder..hope i ll be ready when God comes my way..excellent write..sweet poem my dear friend--dont worry God loves you cos you are a good woman-Charma
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Date: 10/19/2009 5:59:00 PM
Very well done. Inspirational and spiritual. It is definitely one thing to speak to God in prayer but wouldn't it be something to see Him in person! Thank you for the kind words on my poem. I'll bet your painting was lovely.
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Date: 10/19/2009 9:02:00 AM
This is so beautifully written, Dane, and filled with great inspiration provided by your devout faith. Those last four lines bring home the message so brilliantly. Outstanding! Love you, carolyn
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Date: 10/19/2009 7:15:00 AM
great job!! where's the tissue?
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Date: 10/18/2009 10:08:00 PM
Beautifully written. Did you enter this in the Talking to God Contest? You should. Best of luck.
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Date: 10/18/2009 7:10:00 PM
Dane Ann - Wonderful poem hon - we have nothing to fear from God hon he loves us - the one I fear is the one in the mirror - I'm the only one who truly has done me wrong - love you hon - God Bless, mj
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