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If Composed

a harmony on strings of dreams soft music tarries on night's seams it sings a song that makes me whole a melody within my soul i hear the sounds aloft through sleep an assonance composed so deep soft beats my heart it does extol a melody within my soul i hum this tune within my mind the words amiss i cannot find though through my dreams it does inscroll a melody within my soul

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 12/10/2019 9:13:00 PM

I can hear the sirens singing, but not driving me to destruction. Lovely, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2019 10:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Jeff :)

Running Wolves

Date: 12/10/2019 4:08:00 PM

Lovely write, nice rhyme and rythym.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 7:22:00 PM

Thank you Robert... :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/10/2019 2:28:00 PM

Very nice Sandra ! :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 7:22:00 PM

Thank you so much Heidi... hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/10/2019 1:53:00 PM

I really liked the rhythm of the repeating line and overall tone of your poem--harmony it is my friend--a lovely write, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 7:21:00 PM

Thank you Vijay... this is one rhyme form that i can do okay with... glad you enjoyed it my friend... hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/10/2019 12:18:00 PM

"a melody within my soul" - so beautiful!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 7:19:00 PM

Thank you my friend...my muse seems to be lingering in music, melodies... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 12/10/2019 12:00:00 PM

Someone it seems is on a roll, perhaps it's that melody in her soul. : ) Beautiful my friend, you are composing some wonderful poems in this style. I like seeing this side of your talent. Another ~sigh~ moment.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 12:17:00 PM

lol... even your comments rhyme...i figured maybe if i play with this form a few times rhyme will come easier, although i struggle even with this form... Thank you Chris...your comment made me smile at least... hugs