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Poetic Form: Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 January 30

 

*1st Place*
Pick-A-Title, Vol. 41
Contest Judged: 2024 February 09
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

 

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Who gauge a crown with stars at its edge, and fathom hollows beleaguered trails. An unmarked course decorates the pledge, may tether the ring that brinks its ledge, the faithful choose sky-map to lead sails. Instruments and gadgets beg a touch, there's more to be that makes a wonder, this and that may serve their purpose much, the dream remains lest they'll be nonesuch, let strength soar and the weak go under. No small outcome affects such a trend, for the passage takes time that will cost, as novel concerns promptly descend, who'll be the wiser, a fool ascend, impulsive predicaments, claims lost. Star jumpers uses time just because, the relevance bears no consequence, ... till, time travel--worthy for a pause, redo's and reviews, for errs, check flaws, back to Plan A, ... but, ... add the sixth sense. Unexplored regions challenge like bees, too soon to choose a risk you will lose, time's created for necessities, prompts none to favor to win with ease, cast a world less one constant amuse. Harmony soothes what tragedy flits, the ancient mariner in full spring, a starry heaven affairs true grits, ample weighs a voyage chart by wits, the wellspring flows free -- if anything ...

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Date: 2/10/2024 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win in my contest with this spectacular poem, William:-) "Harmony soothes what tragedy flits" So true!
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Date: 2/10/2024 10:24:00 AM
I appreciate it very much, Edward. Twas a nice surprise, my friend, thank you. Aloha, Willlam
Date: 2/9/2024 9:46:00 AM
Beautiful, strong, poetry, just epic! Congratulations on your top win, Hilo! Loved the ending. Aloha Anaya
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Date: 2/9/2024 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, Anaya, you are a wonderful blessing, my friend. Aloha, William
Date: 1/31/2024 6:27:00 AM
Fabulous exploration throughout my friend: An unmarked course decorates the pledge, may tether the ring that brinks its ledge, the faithful choose sky-map to lead sails...
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/1/2024 6:42:00 AM
Another spotlighted moment, Vijay, speaks highly of your exceptional qualities, my friend, Aloha, William
Date: 1/31/2024 5:30:00 AM
wow, enjoyed all the flowing imagery and the ending was fabulous...struck a chord with me...'harmony soothes what tragedy flits.' profound and wise words. have a splendid day...and thanks for resending me the link, Sara
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Date: 2/1/2024 6:39:00 AM
I enjoy highlighted readings, Sara, as they accentuates quality of the writer, Aloha, William
Date: 1/31/2024 1:04:00 AM
You have a wonderful way with words love
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Date: 2/1/2024 6:36:00 AM
Aw, thanks, Karen, Aloha, William
Date: 1/30/2024 11:59:00 PM
A absolutely brillant poem PH which flows so beautifully! Debx
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Date: 2/1/2024 6:35:00 AM
Thanks, Deb, I appreciate your words, Aloha, William

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