Notes About The Poem

Poetic Form: Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 January 30

 

*1st Place*
Pick-A-Title, Vol. 41
Contest Judged: 2024 February 09
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

 

Image: N/A

If Anything

Who gauge a crown with stars at its edge, and fathom hollows beleaguered trails. An unmarked course decorates the pledge, may tether the ring that brinks its ledge, the faithful choose sky-map to lead sails. Instruments and gadgets beg a touch, there's more to be that makes a wonder, this and that may serve their purpose much, the dream remains lest they'll be nonesuch, let strength soar and the weak go under. No small outcome affects such a trend, for the passage takes time that will cost, as novel concerns promptly descend, who'll be the wiser, a fool ascend, impulsive predicaments, claims lost. Star jumpers uses time just because, the relevance bears no consequence, ... till, time travel--worthy for a pause, redo's and reviews, for errs, check flaws, back to Plan A, ... but, ... add the sixth sense. Unexplored regions challenge like bees, too soon to choose a risk you will lose, time's created for necessities, prompts none to favor to win with ease, cast a world less one constant amuse. Harmony soothes what tragedy flits, the ancient mariner in full spring, a starry heaven affairs true grits, ample weighs a voyage chart by wits, the wellspring flows free -- if anything ...
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Ibeh Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 9:27 AM
Congratulations on your top win in my contest with this spectacular poem, William:-) "Harmony soothes what tragedy flits" So true!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 10:24 AM
I appreciate it very much, Edward. Twas a nice surprise, my friend, thank you. Aloha, Willlam
Anaya Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 9:46 AM
Beautiful, strong, poetry, just epic! Congratulations on your top win, Hilo! Loved the ending. Aloha Anaya
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 5:47 PM
Thank you, Anaya, you are a wonderful blessing, my friend. Aloha, William
Pandit Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 6:27 AM
Fabulous exploration throughout my friend: An unmarked course decorates the pledge, may tether the ring that brinks its ledge, the faithful choose sky-map to lead sails...
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 6:42 AM
Another spotlighted moment, Vijay, speaks highly of your exceptional qualities, my friend, Aloha, William
Jones Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 1:04 AM
You have a wonderful way with words love
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 6:36 AM
Aw, thanks, Karen, Aloha, William
M  Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 11:59 PM
A absolutely brillant poem PH which flows so beautifully! Debx
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 6:35 AM
Thanks, Deb, I appreciate your words, Aloha, William
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