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If all there is---is

If all there is …is now And time but an illusion Wondering where it went Causes me confusion If there’s been no then Is it all Zen And the end is Where it will begin Is every sunrise The same one Or even worse There wasn’t one If time is but a spectral dot A web in which the moment’s caught An endless mug of Guinness stout Time gone an a “walk-a-bout” Perhaps I should constrain my pen Forget the world of now and then And have a mindful Zen-like chat With the characters of this and that

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Date: 5/1/2024 10:57:00 AM
You been watching 'Groundhog Day' with Bill Murray again?! lol.
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Date: 4/29/2024 12:29:00 AM
Hi John, Of course you've heard of "Being in the now" John. Very interesting discussion you started here. Some eastern philosophers say, "time is but a samskara formed by the mind, and good or bad actions make impressions on our souls which creates our karma in other lives.
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Date: 4/25/2024 8:07:00 AM
Hello John, You really dig into the essence of existence, questioning the fabric of time and reality. Your words invited introspection on the nature of being, urging me to ponder whether all there truly is lies in the present moment. I loved how your words prompt a journey inward to unravel the mysteries of existence. This thought-provoking reflection. - Blessings, Daniel Warm regards,
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John Lawless
Date: 4/25/2024 4:54:00 PM
Alas, Daniel, in my younger days I was once voted "most likely to get punched out in a bar room" for posing such musings....Appreciate the comment.
Date: 4/24/2024 1:48:00 PM
ha! i love your thought processes here, john! if time is really "an endless mug of guinness stout," that would make me very happy...
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John Lawless
Date: 4/25/2024 4:56:00 PM
Glad ya liked it Ilene. It has been said that the irish can talk for hours and never tell you anything.....
Date: 4/24/2024 9:41:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative/fun write. Great questions. Let me know if you find the answers. Maybe the ending is the way to go... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.........................
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John Lawless
Date: 4/25/2024 4:58:00 PM
It would seem that the greatest "questions" have different answers as they filter through the detritus of dreams and reality....thanks for reading Paula
Date: 4/24/2024 9:15:00 AM
You're a master at this game - great write
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John Lawless
Date: 4/25/2024 5:00:00 PM
DD, I once had a T-shirt that read "PLACES TO GO....PEOPLE TO ANNOY"....HEHEHEEE

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