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I do not have to go far to a popular bar with a huge dance floor. To find someone I would adore, she is not hard to find. It is easy to get the kind that is attractive to the eye. There is always someone nearby. I only sit at the bar, and a woman is not too far. When she turns her head my way, I only have to say, “Hello, how are you?” She says, “How do you do?’ An interesting conversation for a reasonable duration materializes easily. Then I have someone with me. Our slow dancing would start with “Unbreak My Heart” by singer Toni Braxton. When the music had begun we were both out on the floor for slow dancing and some more scintillating conversation. With her accommodation, it was a wonderful dance. With just a short glance, I saw her smile, making me happy all the while. This woman makes my night. She appears to be so right. Then she says, “It’s time to leave” She’s too good to believe. I ask, “Will I see you again?” I pull out my pen. She takes a bar napkin. Some scribbling would begin. She writes her phone number. However, her words encumber. She says, “I live with somebody. If you ever call me, tell him you’re my brother.” I thought I am just another man she has used. I do not like being abused. I get up in a flash, and throw the napkin in the trash.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/12/2012 12:04:00 AM
Ever go home with a Ten at 2 am but wake up with a 2 at 10 am ? Those damn club lights n beer goggles! AND did you say DOOBIE BROS? Andy Gibb " Ahhhh AHHH Ahhhh AAHHHH ( 5 lines of coke ) STAYin Al IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IIII IIIII ve! WOOOOH"....(drops dead)
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Date: 1/10/2012 4:59:00 PM
haha, Robert, this is funny to me, the shoe now on the other foot these days, women abusing men. My son tells me women just aren't like good old mom any more!! This clever little poem also paints you as a Don Juan!!
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Date: 1/10/2012 8:00:00 AM
An interesting and clever poem. A little bit of humour and beautiful rhyming. A tale of fine art dear friend. I love this read. Million thx for sharing And a very Happy New Year to you...
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Date: 1/10/2012 1:25:00 AM
smart man you'll live to dance another day- very entertaining write- and thank you your kind words and visit to my work, Brenda : )
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Date: 1/9/2012 2:14:00 PM
I think that song of Toni Braxton would be a tell tale sign Robert ;) just kidding.. I really enjoyed this tonight and good for your for getting rid of the number :)
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