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If I Died Now

My mind I caught tangled in resentments dissatisfied in anguish and regrets subtracting what I had given from received mulled on revenge for the loss two straight I's bodyguards of frown livid lips stretching face down darkness in eyes fists clenched tight that I deserved more the verdict out. Looking at the mirror gasped in fright if I was to die now I'm always right not even the devil would want me liar! Second Place Winner: William Kekaula-Final 2021 N-A Choice3

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Date: 5/8/2021 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations Frances. You have woven together so many vivid images and uniquely creative visual phrases. So well done. Blessings.
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Date: 5/8/2021 5:14:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Frances! Congratulations on your win! I do concede that this could not be included amongst winners in my contest; but beauty always shines, like the sun! It needs no introduction! God bless
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Date: 5/7/2021 11:19:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/7/2021 9:59:00 PM
I truly enjoyed the mere frankness that your words had instilled in me, Frances, my gratitude for your participation, and my compliments on your well-deserved placement, Aloha!
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Date: 5/4/2021 9:12:00 PM
Very Beautiful!
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