If- a Response

If you can see with eyes of a child
and allow amazement and wonder to be your guide
without fear or doubt

If you can understand the weakness of those who lie
to cover their own frailties
and not set judgment or fault even if the lies are about you

If you can be truthful without using truth as a sword
yet be passionate in your ways without compromising your soul
to those who feast on such things
keeping your honor in trials of decisions

If you can stand to face unrighteousness
and do so in quiet measured confidence
allowing for a peaceful resolution
and can carry life's burdens without complaint
helping those who struggle to do so
finding reasons to help without being asked
or seek restitution for your help

If you can do all these things
then you will be worthy to be called a friend

10/21/18 contest Response to If
note...second submission, first one disappeared
from PS without notice from my manage poems page

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/27/2018 2:22:00 PM
Congratulations for your win. This poem is a favorite for me ! :)
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Date: 11/26/2018 12:38:00 AM
- Congratulations on yours: "In response to IF ...." poems, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/25/2018 6:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Frederic..
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Date: 11/25/2018 11:13:00 AM
We should all have such vision, congratulations Frederic...
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Date: 11/25/2018 9:54:00 AM
Nothing as beautiful and innocent as the eyes of a child..how sad we grow up... Loved your reply to the poem... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 11/8/2018 7:36:00 PM
This one did not get judged yet, did it? I wonder what happened!!
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Date: 11/8/2018 7:35:00 PM
frederic, did you have to do a completely new one, or did you do it almost the same way the second time? Gosh, you don't save to your own file first? you gotta do that in the future i really love your response to the iF. your poem is superb!
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Date: 10/24/2018 10:40:00 PM
Beautiful. I loved your words. Best wishes in the contest. I'm glad I read your poem tonight. My best. Deb
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Date: 10/22/2018 12:07:00 PM
Good advice in every way...Nice write...All the best Frederic
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Date: 10/21/2018 8:42:00 PM
Wonderful and meaningful poem, Frederic.
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Date: 10/21/2018 6:39:00 PM
The exact same thing happened to me today! I had to repost my poem, "Far Yet Close" because it mysteriously disappeared. A first! lol Nicely done poem, Frederic!
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