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Idyllic Pleasure

Idyllic Pleasure (Anacreontic Verse)

Laughter and delight
under a blue sky
on the verdant bank
of a bubbling stream
where luscious food
dulcet and divine 
tempts taste buds
teeming with desire 
while wine flows freely
like the roaming hands
and ardent kisses
of indulgent youths
lured by spring’s warmth
to an ebullient
effervescent mood
where inhibitions
slither unrestrained
in rumpled heaps
as latticed lacing
yields to deft touch
and the setting sun
shyly reticent 
slides behind the hills
in a blushing haze
of purple and red.

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2nd January, 2016
Contest: Anacreontic Verse
Sponsor: Edward Ebbs
Placed 4th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 16, 2016 at 10:19 PM
Hello, Paul, Well I don't enjoy it, But there's a few that are worth my time. Like this one "YOU".hugs. LINDA
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February 17, 2016 at 11:52 AM
You are irresistible, Linda!:) I'm sure you've heard Elvis's devil in disguise:) ... I'll go for the angel:) hugs // paul
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February 8, 2016 at 8:32 PM
I really ought to look up what "anacreontic" means, because I keep on seeing it. I'm assuming it's all one long run-on sentence? In any case this was quite story-tale-ish. I enjoyed the cool and unique word combinations you used like "shyly reticent" and "blushing haze". Congrats on the win!
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February 9, 2016 at 8:05 AM
Thank you for a pleasant visit, Timothy:) I am not sure that the one long run-on sentence is a requisite; I have a feeling that it came about naturally since each line has to consist of just 3-5 syllables. ~ Regards // paul
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February 7, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Paul, I'm actually doing all my old replies today. LOL, you might see a lot of me. LINDA
Callus Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 12:37 PM
I bet you have lots to answer to; it is time consuming, but we wouldn't do it unless we enjoyed it! Take your time....:) paul
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February 7, 2016 at 11:48 AM
Paul, it's my pleasure as well... LINDA
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February 7, 2016 at 11:57 AM
That's lovely...reciprocal pleasure:) // paul
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January 28, 2016 at 9:24 PM
PAUL, CONGRATS, ON YOUR Anacreontic Verse 2- WIN. Luv ~LINDA~
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January 29, 2016 at 2:55 PM
Thank you Linda:) My pleasure to have you stopping by! hugs // paul
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January 20, 2016 at 11:58 AM
a sizzling congrats to you, paul.. huggs
Callus Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 3:51 PM
First time I received sizzling congrats, Nette:) Thank you! Hugs // paul
Mandani Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Wow, you lulled me into a paradisiacal mood! Intoxicating and very very poetic.
Callus Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 3:49 PM
So pleased that you enjoyed li. Abdul; thank you for the positive comments. ~ Regards // paul
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January 20, 2016 at 4:59 AM
How lovely Paul .. loved reading today.. congrats on big win.
Callus Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Thank you for reading and liking, Upma. Your congrats, comments and support are appreciated. ~ Regards // paul
A  Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Paul,,, Congratulationson your Anacreontic Verse 2 win. Luv *Skat*
Callus Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Thank you, Skat...your support is much appreciated:) Hugs // paul
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January 19, 2016 at 5:32 PM
A delightful read Paul many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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January 20, 2016 at 3:46 PM
Thank you, Jan. You did extremely well yourself:) Hugs // paul
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January 19, 2016 at 9:09 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Ed's contest.
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January 19, 2016 at 11:35 AM
Thank you, Richard. Pleased to find you on the winning list, too. ~ Regards // paul
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January 18, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Congrats Paul, thank you for entering :)
Callus Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 11:34 AM
It was my pleasure, Edward! Thank you; so pleased to be on your winners' list. ~ Regards // paul
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January 8, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Hello Paul... I can hear the idyllic music accompanying the scene you set here Paul - beaut lyric indeed - Lindsay
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January 9, 2016 at 8:21 AM
I am pleased that you enjoyed it, Lindsay. Thank you for stopping by, and hope that the new year is treating you well, especially where food is concerned:) // paul
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January 8, 2016 at 12:54 AM
i really enjoy the poem.....great work
Callus Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Thank you for reading and enjoying, LL. ~ All the best. // paul
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January 5, 2016 at 3:36 AM
Paul, beautiful chain verse, am still thinking of a theme though.. =`) hehehehe I enjoyed reading it! Belated HAppy new year!~Olive ELoisa =`)
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January 5, 2016 at 2:41 PM
Thank you Olive_eloi:) I have no doubt that you will come up with something special, out of the box! ~ I hope that the new year started on a positive note for you and that it will bring you much love and happiness. Hugs ~*~ paul
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January 4, 2016 at 4:06 PM
What a delight read, thanks for sharing...........A.M.
Callus Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 12:36 PM
Pleased that you liked it, Afolabi; thank you! ~ Regards // paul
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January 4, 2016 at 2:36 PM
This should do very well indeed. I simply inhaled it in such a good way ... CayCay
Callus Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 3:05 PM
Thank you CayCay! You never fail to encourage:) ~ All the best....paul
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January 4, 2016 at 4:58 AM
Beautiful verse in a bucolic setting, Paul. Lovely lines that rolled on my tongue as I read it them out loud. 7. hugs!
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January 4, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Yes, a pastoral setting it is, Kim! Thank you for the lovely comments and high rating. Pleased to have you back:) Hugs ~*~ paul
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January 3, 2016 at 5:39 PM
excellent write Paul, simply superb...
Callus Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting favourably, White Sage. ~ Regards // paul
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January 3, 2016 at 12:27 PM
- Idyllic pleasure to read this loving poems - Luck in contest, Paul - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 1:27 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise. Hope winter is not being to hard on you! Hugs // paul
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January 3, 2016 at 11:49 AM
i like the visual charm of this verse, paul...so wonderful!... huggs
Callus Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 1:24 PM
Thank you, Nette! I tried my best to present an idyllic situation through the choice of words; hopefully I reached my aim. Regards & Hugs // paul
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January 2, 2016 at 11:57 PM
Beautiful....you can "see" it all. Voyeurism has its charm....lovely
Callus Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 12:18 PM
You view this poem through my eyes, Eileen! Voyeurism was one of the points I had in mind to use, but there was no need since it was already 'understood'. Thank you for your lovely comments. Hugs // paul
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January 2, 2016 at 6:47 PM
Paul, love the scenery. Awesome. The best of luck. SKAT
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January 3, 2016 at 12:15 PM
So pleased that you enjoyed, Skat! Also glad to see you back in action, even though the new year is 3 days old already:) ~ Warm regards // paul
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