'idyllic Moments'

love
became
her vessel
when all alone
transporting her to idyllic moments


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dufresne Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 6:43 PM
this could be about romance or even a transport of Divine contemplation, Wilma. coherent and comforting Tetractys....
Wesley Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 10:11 PM
And don't we need to be there! So special Wilma, romance on the move.
Goff Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 1:53 PM
really cool poem, Wilma....sends my mind far out! jimbo
Peranteau Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 12:19 PM
I see a congratulations is in order here dear poet ! (((((claps))))) A worthy of it for true ! I love when a write flows so well ! Have a beautiful week Wilma ! Much love, james
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 10:48 PM
This one, short and sweet, was worthy of a win! Congratulations.
Loving Iii Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 10:41 AM
yeah, i get that alot.
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 10:31 PM
Very nice picture this creates, Wilma. Sorry I have not been here in a few days. How are you doing?
Johnson Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 10:21 AM
It still makes the world go around. Congratulations Wilma. Love, Joyce
Horne Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 9:21 AM
Beautiful memories can indeed make all the difference! Lovely piece, Wilma lfde
Susan Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 7:12 AM
very cool thought :) instills hope and memories of good times. congratulations on your win!
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 6:55 AM
Congratulations to you for your win in Brian's "Any Which Way" contest Wilma. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 5:33 AM
Congrats Wilma on your HM in the contest with this vibrant visual poetry my friend...lovely luv..
Wesley Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 4:22 PM
Even when alone, we can dream. Lovely Wilma
Seraphin Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 4:13 PM
* “After Slowly Reading This Stirring The Senses Deeply, Wonderful Verse * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Wilma * I Love The Way Your Beauties Seems to But Whisper * Especially The Ending Which Seemed to Reach Pleasantly Into My Heart * These Fluttering Butterfly Wings * Sooo Beautiful & Sooo Very Amazing * Waves Still Crashing About The Shore * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
Williams Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 2:01 PM
Wilma sometimes nothing excists except love, we all need something to grab hold of, top rate well done..David
Fraser Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 11:26 AM
The vessel of memories is priceless Wilma, and they do indeed transport us back to so many moments. Many thanks for your kind words :)
K. Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 11:11 AM
thanks, missy! (ok that exclamation point isn't a stan wound...) !!!! ^_^!!! yup, keep on smiling while inside you're bleeding profusely!!! I missed reading your gems too so I am happy to see you post here :D
K. Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 10:49 AM
Ah, sometimes love is the the one thing we can hold on to during difficult times...ok that and hope & faith... I see somebody's back to writing so super yay for that :D mwahugs
Falotico Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 10:41 AM
You are warming my heart with these lovely inspiring words that flow from your fingers and soul. You know I'm happy to reading you all day. Love all over you my dear. Michael.
Devonshire Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 10:38 AM
As one who lives alone, your poem holds special meaning for me, Wilma. As we remember our loved ones, the memories come rushing back to us. Excellent write, dear. Love, Carolyn
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