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Idiots Like You

Roses are red Violets are blue Idiots like you, belong in a school' Don't get upset, I went there too, I passed all my classes, cuz I was smarter than you, But hey don't you worry' You wont be one for long' Just pass all your classes, Go on what you waiting for, an invitation? No I don't think so go right now.

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Larry Berdoo

Date: 3/19/2014 11:12:00 AM

My ears are ringing, did you call? Mariam, enjoyed your poem. It has alot of passioniate thought. Somewhat speaking from your heart. ~~WRITE ON!~~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/9/2014 9:19:00 PM

wow. I love it. .your first poem rocks...lol... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Darren Watson

Date: 1/30/2014 7:42:00 AM

Not a lady to be crossed obviously . A very enjoyable read .

Aiyah Torres

Date: 1/29/2014 8:35:00 AM

Hi Mariam...Welcome to Poetry Soup!!!..you made an awesome poem ,dear... I hope you enjoy the great experience as you go beyond writing poems...i'm sure you'll love the people here..they are so kind and very supportive...Good luck to your journey in poetry world!!! ..always..AiyaH :0)

Mariam Traore
Date: 1/29/2014 8:38:00 AM

THANK YOU <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2014 3:34:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Mariam- I choose your first great written poem - hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mariam Traore
Date: 1/28/2014 2:28:00 PM

Thank you so much i appreciate it and hope we can be great friends and a big family

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/27/2014 9:20:00 PM

Welcome to this site. You are off and running with this humorous write.

Mariam Traore
Date: 1/27/2014 9:26:00 PM

thank you

Skat A

Date: 1/27/2014 8:58:00 PM

lol, why thanks, I feel like a dunce now, Mariam Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Mariam Traore
Date: 1/27/2014 9:35:00 PM

Thank you Skat i would love that. i would like to start off telling you that i'm handicapped, but it is not something i have courage in telling people, but i feel i can tell u. When i grow up i want to be a designer, poet songwriter, entrepreneur, photographer and writer i write stories.