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Identity

Identity I found a seedling in my soul I realized I have not tended to, She waits for me, So patiently, gently, As if to say “I’m ready to bloom when you are.” She needs sunlight, she needs the front window of my soul, The bay window, the one that gets the morning air. She needs soil, She needs my pen to paper, my slow thoughts, My effort. She whispers her dreams, To stand tall, to grow into a fiery fern, To give shade to all else, To shelter the garden of my soul. I tell her “Be still.” I tell her I see her, I finally call her by name, Tell her she will grow. Beloved, “Identity.”

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Date: 8/18/2017 9:04:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, I mainly like it because of the way how beautifully you ve expressed it all in a poetic way and your feelings are clear, that s what poetry is about, seems like that you re new here, so I should welcome you to ps, I m sure you re definately gonna enjoy your long stay here as the community here is really nice, anyway I ll really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems as well and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 6/15/2017 7:31:00 AM
This was really nicely done Rachel. You have expressed something I believe many of us feel is such a beautiful poetic way.
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