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Ideas Spring Forth

I wander through its corridors And up its winding stairs I enter cobwebbed rooms And find the yesteryears I wander through its seasons And find my autumn there The leaves are falling slowly Yet there is no time to spare I wander through its canyon And find a river running deep There is no time to linger The subconscious never sleeps I wander through its pathways A never ending maze Ideas seem to spring forth Imagination has its ways! 1-3-2022

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Joe Maverick

Date: 5/1/2022 1:54:00 PM

Such a great flow of the descriptive Joseph And the chance that life engenders So pleased; to have chosen this to read Ann.'p

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/12/2022 6:19:00 AM

Your poem took me on a journey back to my last visit to my great grand parents lovely old home that the weather has reclaimed. Bittersweet memories. I love the way you phrase each line in your discovery with the ability to include the reader in their own yesteryears. This is a Fave for me Joseph. Thank you. Blessings xxoo

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/19/2022 12:26:00 AM

Good grief did I ever misunderstand what you wanted for your contest Joseph! I am kicking myself. Thank you for explaining and telling me this is your example. I will try to re-enter if I have time. xxoo

Joseph May
Date: 1/12/2022 6:58:00 AM

Thanks for making it a fave Connie..Blessings

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/10/2022 10:09:00 AM

This is really nice Joseph. I enjoyed it, a beautiful journey :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/6/2022 2:39:00 AM

As I was reading this my imagination took me up my cobweb attic, grabbing my fishing pole, walking through the leaves to the river to fish for trout (lol) My fav pasttime. Thanks for the thoughts. Wonderful write, Joseph. Happy New Year my friend. -Charlie

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/4/2022 12:32:00 PM

Yes, it is amazing that inspiration is everywhere. My heart smiles knowing this fact. This is beautiful in every way. I especially like this line: *I wander through its pathways, a never ending maze*. Your thoughts curl softly around me. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/4/2022 6:14:00 AM

Exquisite style and tenor, Joseph. Enjoyed the journey with you finding yesteryears, autumns, canyons, rivers...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/4/2022 2:28:00 AM

- A lot of beauty ... when we take time to enjoy, Joseph - A lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/4/2022 12:57:00 AM

Great ideas. Wish I don't have this bock of mine.