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I'D Wrather Fall

Is it me, or do you not care The pain of which I will not speak A fear of wisdom And speak I don't know if there's another out there Who is as hurtful as me I feel out on my own And nobody knows just how I feel Lonely in this world Out on my own I rather fall Down, down down Until I hit the ground I rather fall My family left me out on my own And I gotta be strong Gotta face the world, put my head up high And I don't know if there is someone out there that will listen to me And listen to how I feel I feel like there's no one out there that will hear me call Hear me scream Feel me bleedin' I need a shoulder to cry on I don't know if there's another out there Who is as hurtful as me I feel out on my own And nobody knows just how I feel Lonely in this world Out on my own I rather fall Down, down down Until I hit the ground I rather fall I lost it all, Fame, and treasure Love, and pleasure Hugs, and kisses Gone like the wind So tell me Can you hear me callin Can you hear me crying I know i gotta be strong, I gotta be on my feet, and not on my knees Screaming, and bleedin' And hating and fading But you gotta know something I don't know if there's another out there Who is as hurtful as me I feel out on my own And nobody knows just how I feel Lonely in this world Out on my own I rather fall Down, down down Until I hit the ground I rather fall And lose my life, and lose it all again...

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Date: 3/10/2016 12:56:00 PM
Love this poem, KAt. LINDA
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Date: 7/19/2015 5:36:00 PM
KAT, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT
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Date: 1/9/2010 6:13:00 PM
Hey Kat, Welcome to the Soup! Thanks for sharing this. It sounds like a song? Good job expressing how you feel! You will find friends here to listen and as you read and leave comments on the works of others you will see that you are not alone and you will grow in your artistry! Peace to you, dear! Audrey
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Date: 12/29/2009 11:34:00 AM
Yes there are others out there of love. But not all dwell on that level, so be careful. Beautiful verse here Kat, keep the pen flowing. Sincerely, Love, Moses "WELCOME TO SOUP"
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Date: 12/28/2009 10:45:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kat. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/26/2009 7:12:00 PM
I am sorry you feel so all alone its a scary place to be I wish you hopes of happier days ! Love Laura :)
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Date: 12/26/2009 2:23:00 PM
Sad and little scary write. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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