I'D Rather Be a Hillbillie

I'd rather be a hillbillie
than a bybillie or blowbillie
to try to be all three, you see
would drive me to insanity.

Hillbillies are fun and fancy free
can run as far as you can see
may be poor, ain’t got no teeth
but that don’t bother’m in the least!

Bybillies are skittishy and shy
seldom stay, always say "goodbye"
they never joke, don't even try
just mumble, complain, whine and cry.

Blowbillies are too puffed up
have big mouths, can’t keep them shut
boast and brag, often disrupt 
full of hot air, they up look quite stuffed! 

I’d rather be a hillbillie 
than a bybillie or blowbillie 
and climb the hills and know the land
and laugh and hunt “to beat the band”.

Hillbillies love to dance and sing
know how to play the fiddle and swing
and love to roam the fields in spring
I'd rather be a hillbillie more than anything!























 


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Pettit Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 1:26 PM
If this won in somebody's contest, then congratulations! It looked like a formidable contender!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 3:46 AM
Laura, you did an excellent job conveying what I was hoping everyone would convey - a hillbilly, bybillie and blowbillie. I loved the way you described them, and played right into my contest. Well done! Congrats!
Leiser Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Thank you, Caren, for placing my poem at the top! I was thrilled, and am glad it was what you were looking for :)
Allison Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 6:20 PM
many congrats Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
Pett Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 7:30 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Laura with your well written verse, challenging but interesting contest so well done. :))
Leiser Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 9:23 AM
Thank you, Roy! I appreciate your kind comments :)
Hoffman Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:32 PM
Congrats on a well deserved first place win Laura; this awesome write depicts the three different billies perfectly!~Che :)
Leiser Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 9:20 AM
Thanks, Cheryl! So glad you enjoyed it :)
Sietesantos Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Congratulations, dear Laura on your top podium win! I thoroughly enjoyed this amusing piece, so witty - made me giggle:-)! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita
Leiser Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Thank you, Pandita! So glad this put a smile on your face :)
Gauthier Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Back with most deserving congrats for a gold medal win, Laura. Well done.
Leiser Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Glad you liked this one :)
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 12:15 PM
Enjoyed reading, Laura, I've heard they also love their kissing cousins :) . Congratulations on your awesome great write..Hugs Eve
Leiser Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Thank you, Eve! I’m so glad you liked this one :)
Haight Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 10:44 AM
Laura, you've met this contest challenge so well! I couldn't think of what to write, but you certainly wrote a very creative poem. Congratulations on your top of the podium win! Hugs, Sandra
Leiser Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 1:24 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra! Glad you liked this. :)
Gentry Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 12:28 AM
Love it! A winner. Well written, fun, very clever.
Leiser Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 1:23 PM
Thanks, Susan! Glad you enjoyed this one! :)
Allison Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 5:47 PM
what a fun poem Laura, i could cope with writing about hillbillies but the other two were beyond my creative capabilities lol:-) very good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Loved it Laura, grew up watching the Beverly hillbillies, happy days. Tom. Good luck.
Wigley Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 1:38 AM
You'd make a fine Clampett, I'm sure, Laura. Excellent. Viv x
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 1:33 AM
Brilliant, Laura. You worked the three elements of the challenge magnificently. Bravo.
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