Icy Waters

I wade into the icy waters
And weave my way amongst the reeds
And watch the ducks as they scuttle
From ripple to ripple diving playfully.
 
I feel so young despite my age
When in the stream I unclad my feet.
Rough soles, thick though sore
Move carefully over shingles bare.
 
It is as if the water cleanses
My heavy soul from all its sins
From so many transgressions
From so many injustices.
 
But it is always thus with life it seems
That we remember only the ugly past;
We soon forget our good and blessings
Instead we suffer greed for a better life.
 
So let us raise our expectations,
Commit ourselves to our resolutions.
Go on our journey through its destination
And waste not our lives in angry simulations.
 
For if like ducks we dive into the stream
And search for tidbits, juicy and sweet,
We'll find so many treasures that 
We should forever hold so dear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 3/23/2023 11:22:00 AM
I really love the positivity in this one Victor.
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Date: 3/22/2023 1:20:00 PM
A wonderful write/story. I enjoyed it. Have a great/blessed day..................
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Date: 3/21/2023 7:08:00 AM
This one caught my eye because we have ice in the birdbath this morning and a heavy frost everywhere. Yes, we do need to search for the tibits of good in life. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page once again. Sara
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Date: 3/21/2023 2:26:00 AM
Yes Victor, we really dont need a lot of this and more of that and those a lot. We have to learn to be ok with exactly what we have got. Lovely poem Victor Best Wishes Wen
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Date: 3/20/2023 7:12:00 PM
I dig this because oftentimes I forget to appreciate my blessings. Thank you, Vic, for reminding us to enjoy life with great fullness.
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Date: 3/20/2023 12:15:00 PM
Nice one, Victor, but oh my, I do not like icy water.
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Date: 3/20/2023 12:00:00 PM
we should always swim the waters of expectation and let go of the angry moments of our lives. well written Victor, so much fluidity here.
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Date: 3/19/2023 9:06:00 PM
I like this interesting interesting life anthology lots of gems to be found, for those who dare.. Thanks..LF.B
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Date: 3/19/2023 8:05:00 PM
Makes us ponder, wonderful poem, Victor:)
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Date: 3/19/2023 4:56:00 PM
Your poem holds such truth, Victor. Taking pleasure in today and in our tomorrows, cleanses us from fruitless discontent and regret. An impacting verse. :)
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Date: 3/19/2023 2:28:00 PM
"But it is always thus with life it seems That we remember only the ugly past; We soon forget our good and blessings Instead we suffer greed for a better life." So very true. We need to release our pain and selfishness and find peace in God.
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Date: 3/19/2023 1:13:00 PM
Yes, indeed! We should be thankful for our blessings. I like the positive turn in the ending lines, Victor.
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Date: 3/19/2023 9:47:00 AM
I can see your poetic image and imagine myself there. Great job.
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Date: 3/19/2023 7:44:00 AM
You are right Victor. We should live in thanks for all of the blessings we receive, most of which we take for granted. Nice read on a Sunday morning.
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Date: 3/19/2023 7:04:00 AM
Victor, a great poem and message!
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Date: 3/19/2023 6:20:00 AM
If I had been observing ducks, I would have thought of doing some sort of spiritual cleansing in a pond. Victor; I thoroughly enjoyed reading your great poem.
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Date: 3/19/2023 6:01:00 AM
Lovely thought. Felt as if I was wading, watching the ducks, and being cleansed. Wonderful write, dear Victor!
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Date: 3/19/2023 4:49:00 AM
- "We soon forgot our good and blessings Instead we suffer greed for a better life" the mirror of truth, Victor - A thought-provoking and great poem ... thank you, my friend - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs
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