Icy Waters

I wade into the icy waters
And weave my way amongst the reeds
And watch the ducks as they scuttle
From ripple to ripple diving playfully.
 
I feel so young despite my age
When in the stream I unclad my feet.
Rough soles, thick though sore
Move carefully over shingles bare.
 
It is as if the water cleanses
My heavy soul from all its sins
From so many transgressions
From so many injustices.
 
But it is always thus with life it seems
That we remember only the ugly past;
We soon forget our good and blessings
Instead we suffer greed for a better life.
 
So let us raise our expectations,
Commit ourselves to our resolutions.
Go on our journey through its destination
And waste not our lives in angry simulations.
 
For if like ducks we dive into the stream
And search for tidbits, juicy and sweet,
We'll find so many treasures that 
We should forever hold so dear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 11:22 AM
I really love the positivity in this one Victor.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 1:20 PM
A wonderful write/story. I enjoyed it. Have a great/blessed day..................
Kendrick Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 7:08 AM
This one caught my eye because we have ice in the birdbath this morning and a heavy frost everywhere. Yes, we do need to search for the tibits of good in life. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page once again. Sara
Volumes Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 2:26 AM
Yes Victor, we really dont need a lot of this and more of that and those a lot. We have to learn to be ok with exactly what we have got. Lovely poem Victor Best Wishes Wen
Chuuk Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 7:12 PM
I dig this because oftentimes I forget to appreciate my blessings. Thank you, Vic, for reminding us to enjoy life with great fullness.
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Nice one, Victor, but oh my, I do not like icy water.
Rose  Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 12:00 PM
we should always swim the waters of expectation and let go of the angry moments of our lives. well written Victor, so much fluidity here.
Buss Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 9:06 PM
I like this interesting interesting life anthology lots of gems to be found, for those who dare.. Thanks..LF.B
Daniel Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 8:05 PM
Makes us ponder, wonderful poem, Victor:)
Buehler Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 4:56 PM
Your poem holds such truth, Victor. Taking pleasure in today and in our tomorrows, cleanses us from fruitless discontent and regret. An impacting verse. :)
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 2:28 PM
"But it is always thus with life it seems That we remember only the ugly past; We soon forget our good and blessings Instead we suffer greed for a better life." So very true. We need to release our pain and selfishness and find peace in God.
Pandit Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 1:13 PM
Yes, indeed! We should be thankful for our blessings. I like the positive turn in the ending lines, Victor.
Hawley Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 9:47 AM
I can see your poetic image and imagine myself there. Great job.
Turner Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 7:44 AM
You are right Victor. We should live in thanks for all of the blessings we receive, most of which we take for granted. Nice read on a Sunday morning.
Kitchin Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 7:04 AM
Victor, a great poem and message!
Poet Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 6:20 AM
If I had been observing ducks, I would have thought of doing some sort of spiritual cleansing in a pond. Victor; I thoroughly enjoyed reading your great poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 6:01 AM
Lovely thought. Felt as if I was wading, watching the ducks, and being cleansed. Wonderful write, dear Victor!
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 4:49 AM
- "We soon forgot our good and blessings Instead we suffer greed for a better life" the mirror of truth, Victor - A thought-provoking and great poem ... thank you, my friend - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs
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