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Icy Pond

White snow clings softly To brown cattails, ground beside The icy cold pond Matching white swans, ducks Still bravely swin in pond Resisting the cold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/10/2009 4:38:00 AM
Beautiful images in this one. Lovely poem ~Juliane
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Date: 12/8/2009 10:14:00 PM
Your poem is so descriptive that it caused a cold shiver to wash over me.Cold write. -Lynette
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:41:00 PM
This Choka throws out lovely images Sara >> James
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Date: 12/2/2009 4:17:00 AM
Beautful Choka Sara. Thank my friend for the beautiful read. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2009 7:55:00 AM
I would like to be inside the house, drinking hot chocolate, looking at this pond from the window. What a lovely scene. ! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/1/2009 5:19:00 AM
beautiful scene!
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