Icy Pond

White snow clings softly
To brown cattails, ground beside
The icy cold pond

Matching white swans, ducks
Still bravely swin in pond
Resisting the cold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Thomas Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 4:38 AM
Beautiful images in this one. Lovely poem ~Juliane
Chachere Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 10:14 PM
Your poem is so descriptive that it caused a cold shiver to wash over me.Cold write. -Lynette
Fraser Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 12:41 PM
This Choka throws out lovely images Sara >> James
Brown Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 4:17 AM
Beautful Choka Sara. Thank my friend for the beautiful read. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 7:55 AM
I would like to be inside the house, drinking hot chocolate, looking at this pond from the window. What a lovely scene. ! Love, Carrie
Culverhouse Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 5:19 AM
beautiful scene!
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