Icy Fantasies

opaque windowpane tracing icy fantasies warm breath erases written October 22, 2021

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/23/2021 8:29:00 PM

Interesting, made me think of writing in the sand on the beach. ~ Out-of-Season! :) gw

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/23/2021 8:52:00 PM

Thank you, gw. I think I can see how it might stir those thoughts.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/23/2021 1:53:00 AM

You are on a roll with Jack Frost's windows, and it is likeable!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/23/2021 1:37:00 PM

I am, indeed. Thanks for enjoying them.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 10/23/2021 12:24:00 AM

I love this weather when nature turns the heat off and we have Jack Frost to keep us cool...Delice

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/23/2021 1:37:00 PM

Thanks, Delice. Not my favorite, but I'll take it!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/22/2021 12:37:00 PM

Jewels of ice crystals on a windowpane - a beautiful sight especially when seen from the inside of a cozy room. Really nice haiku Milt. Winter does leave her signature everywhere! Blessings!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/22/2021 12:58:00 PM

Thanks so much for your kind, thoughtful comments on my little poem, Sam.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/22/2021 10:35:00 AM

Last winter I woke to a frosty morning and Jack's artwork was all over the outside of the windows, isn't nature wonderful. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/22/2021 11:26:00 AM

It certainly is. Too often, though, we don't take time to enjoy it. If we linger, the sun will wipe out Jack's handiwork.