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Icy Carpet

27 February 2010

Icy Carpet
By: Noel N. Villarosa


Frozen waterfall
Weaving naked rocky hills
Roots grappled firmly

5th Place to Raul Moreno's Icy Cascade Contest: 3/7/2010

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Bill Frew

Date: 3/24/2010 5:06:00 PM

great write!thanks

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/13/2010 3:03:00 PM

Dear Noel, Beautiful Imagery gripping the reader Superb Write I see YOU have Great POETIC insight as YOUR First Comment to my POEM "Winter's Quilt" "I am sure this is a Winner" Spread YOUR POETIC Talent Throughout the SOUP Help us become better POETS as YOU YOURSELF Are YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/7/2010 12:02:00 PM

Congratulations Noel, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:37:00 PM

Great writing! congratulations!!

Thomas Kurdyla

Date: 3/4/2010 9:46:00 AM

Noel, I love this one! Could be Basho himself! Congrats! Tom

John Freeman

Date: 3/4/2010 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations on #5 Noel. Agape, Moses

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/3/2010 9:38:00 PM

So very nice Haiku! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Marty Owens

Date: 3/3/2010 7:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/3/2010 5:06:00 PM

congratulations on your win Noel!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/3/2010 11:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Noel with this wonderful haiku. Your imagery was breathtaking. Blessings, Connie

James Fraser

Date: 3/3/2010 11:29:00 AM

Noel, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James

Date: 3/3/2010 9:41:00 AM

Just stopping by to add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/3/2010 8:49:00 AM

A great, descriptive haiku. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/3/2010 5:28:00 AM

Congrats Noel on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for u to enjoy with your beautiful description of the photo ... enjoy this special victory..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 3/3/2010 3:20:00 AM

Liked this one from the first time I read it. Many congratulations Déirdre

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2010 3:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Noel. I can see your words in this picture. Love,Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/3/2010 1:37:00 AM

Noel, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/2/2010 5:14:00 AM

enjoyed reading today!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/1/2010 4:35:00 AM

Dear Noel, Congratulations on this most Amazing Haiku I believe I'll see YOU in the Winner's Circle If I may make a suggestion I think YOU should not put YOUR Name above YOUR POEMS that YOU enter in any Contest If it is a Blind Judging YOUR POEM would be disqualified YOU are a Very Good POET YOUR words are YOU - YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG --PS Sorry I haven't talk as of late MY Bad

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/27/2010 3:55:00 PM

This is very well put together, very pretty picture captured here. Déirdre Ó Maidín