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Icicles

icicles dripping plip-plopping on solid ground vanish suddenly
written September 16, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/20/2021 11:09:00 AM
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I can almost hear them sinking into the ground with their plip plops.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/20/2021 1:37:00 PM
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Me, too. I went back to the dentist today. I was in bad pain. He said it is healing, but slowly and I just have to live with it. He said, "Take those pain pills, that's what they're for." When we get older it must take longer to heal. He took the stitches out, too. So, I came home and took a pill and slept for a couple of hours. Feel some better, but I'm going to take the pills until it's well and doesn't hurt so bad anymore. Plip Plop! Phone drop!
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Delice Arleen Skelly
Date: 9/17/2021 4:02:00 AM
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I am just thinking of winter as I read the word icicles. So longing for a good frosty day...Delice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/17/2021 8:06:00 AM
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I can do without that, Delice. I do love the warm weather.
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Sotto Poet
Date: 9/16/2021 6:32:00 PM
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Great Haiku, Milton. You captured a remarkable image of spring in this haiku.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/16/2021 7:03:00 PM
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Thanks so much, Lasaad. I really appreciate your comment.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/16/2021 11:05:00 AM
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Love the image Milton, a sure sign spring isn't too far away. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/16/2021 11:42:00 AM
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Yes, Tom. I'm afraid I was dreaming! (chuckling)
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NJ Tomcatx
Date: 9/16/2021 10:18:00 AM
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Nice haiku--esp.like the last line
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/16/2021 10:23:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Nick. I'm so glad you liked it.

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