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Icicles

icicles
                        melting
                     in the warm
                      winter sun
                          going
                          going
                          gone


                        


Let’s Get Creative With Haiku Poetry Contest
Constance La France
3/17/2021
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Maurice Rigoler

Date: 6/7/2024 11:32:00 AM

Friend, I wrote a short poem about icicles some years ago. They reminded me of upsidedown organ pipes! Thank you for your generous comment on my poem on an old photo. / Maurice

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/16/2022 12:17:00 PM

Hello J. Summers icicles do melt fast in the winter sunlight. Enjoybyour day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/17/2022 5:31:00 AM

Hello J. Summers, some of those icicles are huge !They take forever to melt. Enjoy your day my friend. ---Darlene

J. Summers
Date: 5/16/2022 4:06:00 PM

Thanks much Darlene. John

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2021 12:34:00 PM

wow what a creative haiku, love the way you formatted it to look like melting icicles:-) hugs Jan xx

J. Summers
Date: 4/8/2021 2:37:00 PM

Thank you Jan, hoping all is well. John

Judy Ball

Date: 3/27/2021 9:05:00 AM

Wonderful John. Excellent imagery. Just like the icicles melting on my eaves right now. Good Stuff, God Bless, JB

J. Summers
Date: 3/27/2021 10:31:00 PM

Thanks Judy, it is always appreciated. John

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/22/2021 6:37:00 AM

Yay, yay, yay. Spring has sprung!

J. Summers
Date: 3/22/2021 5:29:00 PM

It is so good to see winter finally on its way out. Thanks. John

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/21/2021 7:09:00 AM

love it ~

J. Summers
Date: 3/21/2021 12:26:00 PM

Thanks Line, hoping you are doing fine. John

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/21/2021 6:50:00 AM

Great haiku about something we see in winter. Today is the first day of spring, and the weather can only get better.

J. Summers
Date: 3/21/2021 12:25:00 PM

It’s a great day here in East Tennessee. Getting ready to fire up the grill for honey chipotle chicken quarters and strip steaks. Thanks for reading. John