James Fraser Poet Quatrain

Iceberg Beauty

They look virgin pure
As white as can be
But if you look more closely
The more you see

On the surface they are
What they appear to be
But under the surface
Its what we can not see

They can lure you in
With their beauty and charm
Their surface of hope
But below there's harm

The further you look
And the deeper down
There are so many more
So many more around





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Michael Poyntz March 27, 2010 at 2:35 PM Great piece of work James. Excellent comprehension and execution. irish

Lynette Chachere March 25, 2010 at 9:39 PM under the surface, there is the true beauty. i strongly believe in your words. i think i might jusst favorite this. this meaning of your write has much to do with my life. -Always&Forever Lynette

Doris Culverhouse March 25, 2010 at 5:16 PM enjoyed, moving piece.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 25, 2010 at 1:01 PM James..hope u received the several messages I sent u regarding PP... hope all has been resolved and thankxxx for your special comment on my poetry..today..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Sara Kendrick March 25, 2010 at 3:57 AM Simple poem that says so much about life...The depth of which can not be told in words...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...I appreciate you taking you time to do that. Sara

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2010 at 10:14 PM This is charming, James. I enjoyed the read. And thanks so much for seeing my blog. I just put up instructions how to know your numbers. I hope you will let me know yours! Luv, Andrea

Mary Meade Stephenson March 24, 2010 at 11:57 AM What a beautiful piece you have penned here James. Nature is so awesome and wonderful to write about. Magnificent job! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. I am lost without the internet but it does give me more time to write. Have a gloriously blessed day~Mary~

Bill Frew March 23, 2010 at 4:35 PM Great write,thanx!

Doris Culverhouse March 23, 2010 at 4:17 PM enjoyed

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 23, 2010 at 4:15 PM Nice James and so intricate your lines.. u make icebergs a thing of beauty for sure..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"