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Iceberg Beauty

They look virgin pure As white as can be But if you look more closely The more you see On the surface they are What they appear to be But under the surface Its what we can not see They can lure you in With their beauty and charm Their surface of hope But below there's harm The further you look And the deeper down There are so many more So many more around http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-7.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/27/2010 2:35:00 PM
Great piece of work James. Excellent comprehension and execution. irish
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Date: 3/25/2010 9:39:00 PM
under the surface, there is the true beauty. i strongly believe in your words. i think i might jusst favorite this. this meaning of your write has much to do with my life. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/25/2010 5:16:00 PM
enjoyed, moving piece.
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Date: 3/25/2010 1:01:00 PM
James..hope u received the several messages I sent u regarding PP... hope all has been resolved and thankxxx for your special comment on my poetry..today..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/25/2010 3:57:00 AM
Simple poem that says so much about life...The depth of which can not be told in words...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...I appreciate you taking you time to do that. Sara
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Date: 3/24/2010 10:14:00 PM
This is charming, James. I enjoyed the read. And thanks so much for seeing my blog. I just put up instructions how to know your numbers. I hope you will let me know yours! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/24/2010 11:57:00 AM
What a beautiful piece you have penned here James. Nature is so awesome and wonderful to write about. Magnificent job! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. I am lost without the internet but it does give me more time to write. Have a gloriously blessed day~Mary~
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Date: 3/23/2010 4:35:00 PM
Great write,thanx!
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Date: 3/23/2010 4:17:00 PM
enjoyed
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Date: 3/23/2010 4:15:00 PM
Nice James and so intricate your lines.. u make icebergs a thing of beauty for sure..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"
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