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iceberg - haiku

jagged meringue peaks
etched on steel blue frosted skies
perilous splendor


Liz Reilly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/21/2012 3:49:00 PM
Great imagery, Liz. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/19/2012 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Liz. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/18/2012 5:06:00 PM
wow, I noticed below, I had faved this one a long time ago. It remains splendiforuous!!! Congrats again.
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Date: 3/16/2012 8:52:00 PM
congrats Liz on an awesome win for these splendid words of Haiku luv..
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Date: 3/16/2012 8:11:00 AM
Congrats, Liz. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:52:00 PM
liz, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 2/18/2012 9:41:00 PM
oh my gosh, this is OUTSTANDING a FAVE for this. Just love the last line. love ALL of it.(congrats in Brian's contest, but i"d have given it first place)
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Date: 2/16/2012 10:08:00 PM
congrats Liz on winning an HM for another great writer luv..
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Date: 2/16/2012 2:51:00 PM
Great caliber..The descriptiveness is excellent..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 2/15/2012 9:15:00 PM
Congratulations, Liz! Amazing haiku. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/15/2012 4:09:00 PM
Liz, where do I start with this one. I write a lot of Haiku's and this one is wonderful. Form wise, it's spot on. You have both the 'season' and 'cut' words. You use highly descriptive words and paint a complete picture. This is what a Haiku should look like, in my humble opinion. Outstanding job. Congrats on winning HM in Brian's contest............................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/15/2012 2:12:00 PM
Brian liked this, and so do I. Congratulations on your win Liz.
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Date: 2/15/2012 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian Strand's "Short & Sweet" contest Liz. Love, Carol
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