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Ice Sheets

i want to go back back to the soft world of sleep because harsh reality is as hard as my cement pillow

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/9/2019 9:28:00 AM

This is good. I volunteer at our local shelter. Reality can be very harsh for these men. We often take for granted our nice soft warm beds.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/9/2019 7:59:00 PM

Thank you Richard. But as I've mentioned, only if it's whimsy, my poetry is me. I just wanted to go back to bed but had to get up for work lol.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 9/9/2019 7:14:00 AM

Ooh, potent penning. Great poem my friend! xomo

Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/9/2019 7:57:00 PM

I'd rather be dreaming Maureen lol, but always so much thanks.