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Ice Pond-Tb

The ice broke, pond
what's beyond.. Guy,
hair blonde...cold stiff





January 27, 2019
Contest: Than Baulk
Sponsor: Charles Messina







January 27, 2019
Contest: Than Baulk
Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Ann Gilmour Date: 2/14/2019 12:27:00 AM Sending congrats on your chilly win Alexis, well done with kindest thoughts Ann xx Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 2/13/2019 3:45:00 PM Dropping back to say many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 2/11/2019 10:52:00 PM Congratulations Alexis, glad to see this on the winner's list! Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 2/11/2019 8:12:00 AM Well done, Alexis brrrr (lol). Congratulations on your placement in my contest. hugs Charlie Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 2/11/2019 11:31:00 AM Hi Charles, Thank you very much.You held a good contest. I never even heard of the form until you hosted the contest. I appreciate my placement in your contest.

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/11/2019 6:22:00 AM Stopping back with congratulations on your win, Alexis! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/30/2019 1:21:00 PM Excellent imagery, Alexis. It's too cold for the ice to break in most of the U.S. now. Best wishes in the contest! Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 1/30/2019 11:48:00 AM Hi Alexis, Cold stiff gave me cold shivers. Imagine if this was true, start of an excellent horror movie! Well chosen words which strung together give you your desired result - well penned Alexis and good luck! Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/29/2019 3:13:00 PM Oh you got a story out of yours. Nicely done! yes, I have a cat but also a dog. he is much more annoying than our cat but I miss the affectionate cat I had a long time ago. she was as friendly as a puppy dog!! Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 1/29/2019 12:44:00 PM Stiffly chilly ... and many questions which so far have gone unanswered! gl in the contest, Alexis. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Bobby May Date: 1/28/2019 5:07:00 PM I like this one and the other one but I would have pick this one well done Alexis! Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 1/28/2019 5:32:00 PM Hi Bobby, I appreciate you saying that. Thanks for stopping by:-) Alexis

Jan Allison Date: 1/28/2019 3:24:00 PM certainly is a chilling read alexis!:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 1/28/2019 5:36:00 PM Hi Jan, I'm glad you stopped by. Thanks for your help earlier:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/28/2019 1:26:00 PM - So this is "Than-Bauk" poem, I've never seen it before ... super written, Alexis - Best wishes for a win to you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 1/28/2019 1:32:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise, I'm not that famliar with either. I just wanted to give it a go. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner Date: 1/28/2019 1:20:00 PM Such captivating visuals, I think this will do well! Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 1/28/2019 1:25:00 PM Hi Michelle, Thank you so much. I deleted the other one. I hope the sponsor feels the way that you do. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/28/2019 12:33:00 PM Gave me a chill reading it lol. Good luck. Tom. Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 1/28/2019 1:33:00 PM Hi Tom, That's good right? I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Joseph May Date: 1/28/2019 10:39:00 AM Very nicely done Alexis...GL in the contest.. Login to Reply