Ice King

mother polar bear three newly introduced cubs... barren ice cold land frozen barren land void of prey~vegetation... mother's warmth and milk The ice cube begins to melt Icy water trickles down Pain and agony is felt In an icy land just frowns Written: August 05, 2013 Poet: Sara Kendrick

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/19/2013 6:02:00 PM

beautiful, congratulations.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2013 4:51:00 PM

Hello Sara, love the winning poem.. congrats...Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2013 2:09:00 PM

- It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Sara! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 8/19/2013 1:58:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS, SARA ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/5/2013 8:32:00 AM

- Like your wonderful suggestions for this contest Sara! - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/5/2013 7:03:00 AM

Excellent haiku suite, imagery perfect true to form, a very enjoyable read, good luck in the contest, blessings sueellen