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Ice King - Contest

Eyes cold as ice fire
Ice sword sharper than steel .....
Numbed to all pain



Penned 16 July 2013 by Seren Roberts

Ice king contest





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Tim Ryerson Date: 8/5/2013 7:16:00 PM Very 'cool' haiku Seren!...LOVED the first line especially...Very unique approach and also, thanks for the heads up Soup Mail to which I have replied - Tim Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 8/6/2013 2:33:00 PM Thanks Tim, hope you were lucky....Seren

Isaiah Zerbst Date: 7/19/2013 10:10:00 AM Good one! Winning wishes. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 7/20/2013 12:29:00 AM Thank you Isaiah ....Seren

Jack Ellison Date: 7/17/2013 2:57:00 PM uh... that's "haiku" not "hailu" LOL Wow! Think I need some bed rest! Login to Reply

Jack Ellison Date: 7/17/2013 2:54:00 PM Me too Russell, what the heck is a haibun? LOL Anyway Seren, love your hailu... hugs, Jack xoxox Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 7/20/2013 12:27:00 AM Lol Jack wait a minute i will fluff up the pillows foryou....Seren

Skat A Date: 7/16/2013 9:23:00 PM peeking in. thanks for the side note. SKAT Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 7/17/2013 1:06:00 AM Lol caught you peeking...Seren

Russell Sivey Date: 7/16/2013 7:04:00 AM This might be a good opportunity to create a haibun while including what is included in the notes as part of the poem, mixed with the Haiku, that would be awesome! This poem is tremendous my friend, I truly loved reading this delightfully amazing poem this morning! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 7/16/2013 7:10:00 PM what the heck is a Haibun Russell....Seren