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Below zero temp'rature recording puzzles my special child's understanding midst his engrossment for ice and thermometer device checking freezer* with its coolness' reading.
December 31, 2020 *We live in a "winterless" place; thus, my child's exposure to ice is the freezer. 4th place, "Winter Snow or Ice Limerick Contest" Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 1/8/2021.

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Date: 1/12/2021 12:27:00 PM
Your intuitive idea gives your child a concrete example of ice, frozen ground and temperature. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Date: 1/10/2021 12:19:00 PM
NIcely done, Beata. And your note makes us understand about your son! Congrats.
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Date: 1/8/2021 4:25:00 PM
what a charming poem, many congrats Beata:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/8/2021 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement Beata.
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Date: 1/8/2021 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Beata!!
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Date: 1/8/2021 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Beata! Linda
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Date: 1/8/2021 4:26:00 AM
Beata, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative limerick!
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Date: 12/31/2020 8:37:00 PM
Beatta, The freezer in this poem is so inviting. I wish you joyous tidings. If it be in a warm place, all the better for the Winter's inviting. -Richard
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