Beata Agustin Poet Limerick

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Ice Engrossment

Below zero temp'rature recording
puzzles my special child's understanding
midst his engrossment for ice
and thermometer device
checking freezer* with its coolness' reading.

December 31, 2020
*We live in a "winterless" place; thus, my child's exposure to ice is the freezer.
4th place, "Winter Snow or Ice Limerick Contest"
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 1/8/2021.

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Sara Kendrick January 12, 2021 at 12:27 PM Your intuitive idea gives your child a concrete example of ice, frozen ground and temperature. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2021 at 12:19 PM NIcely done, Beata. And your note makes us understand about your son! Congrats.

Jan Allison January 8, 2021 at 4:25 PM what a charming poem, many congrats Beata:-) hugs jan xx

Jo Chamberlain January 8, 2021 at 11:55 AM Congratulations on your winning placement Beata.

Mark Koplin January 8, 2021 at 7:40 AM Congratulations on your win, Beata!!

Linda Alice Fowler January 8, 2021 at 6:11 AM Congratulations on the win Beata! Linda

Tania Kitchin January 8, 2021 at 4:26 AM Beata, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative limerick!

Quoth Theraven December 31, 2020 at 8:37 PM Beatta, The freezer in this poem is so inviting. I wish you joyous tidings. If it be in a warm place, all the better for the Winter's inviting. -Richard