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Ice Echoes In the Dark

trees in splinter hark frost expands through brittle bark winter leaves it’s mark Haiku 7 placement promise Sponsored by Brian Strand 13/01/21 placement 3rd

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Date: 1/22/2021 7:51:00 PM
Very fine end rhyme Haiku. A worthy win indeed. Best wishes, Brian
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/22/2021 8:38:00 PM
Thanks Brian, I find sometimes that if haikus need a little bit extra, the rhyme can add a nice kick to them, cheers David
Date: 1/15/2021 11:13:00 AM
- That's exactly how it is outside my window this winter, David :) - Congratulations on your win :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/15/2021 11:29:00 AM
So beautiful I’m jealous, Anne Lise, thank you. I remembered this from a really bad winter we had some years ago, nobody was really sure what was happening til the frost melted and the scars revealed themselves, cheers David
Date: 12/26/2020 4:18:00 AM
You have got it, David. I get into trees, too, but your succinct imag is enviable.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/26/2020 6:46:00 AM
Your too kind sally, again delighted you enjoyed and a little envy makes it better, cheers David
Date: 12/22/2020 8:54:00 AM
Very good, David!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/22/2020 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Kim enjoyed writing this one, cheers David
Date: 12/22/2020 8:12:00 AM
A very perceptive haiku David, thank you for sharing.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/22/2020 8:47:00 AM
Your very welcome Mystic Rose, thank you for zoning in on my page, cheers David
Date: 12/22/2020 7:53:00 AM
Ooh that’s good! A winner for me, my best to you in the contest! xomo
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/22/2020 8:45:00 AM
thanks Super Mo, competition will be stiff, cheers David

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