Ice Crystals

Ice crystals plummet

Frozen earth covered in silk

Sunlight smiles weakly




Sasha Edl, An Haiku From Your Window
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 5:32 AM
Belated congratulations on your #1 placement Sasha, in the contest "An Haiku From Your Window" sponsored by Michael J. Falotico. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 2:20 PM
Good to see your at the top Sasha. congratulations on your first place. Agape, Moses
Sutherland Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 8:18 AM
Absolutely wonderful!
Smith Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 8:14 AM
Congrats on getting first place! You deserve it for sure! :)
George   Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 3:56 AM
Just beautiful! Congrats on your FIRST PLACE, win, dear Sasha. Lainie
Johnson Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 5:19 PM
This is truly a beautiful haiku. He did a good job in picking the top one. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 2:48 PM
It sounds like a beautiful ice storm came. That leaves the earth looking spectacular. A big congratulations. Where is this scene?
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February 8, 2011 at 2:17 PM
Congrats Sasha On your 1st place win my contest, your images jumped out to me the very first time I read it... Enjoy and Im sure there will be many more wins for you,,Love Michael
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February 8, 2011 at 2:07 PM
Congrats on your 1st.place win.This was terrific and enjoyable.~Teresa~
Calhoun Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 9:13 AM
Hi Sasha - CONGRATULATIONS on your BIG WIN in Michael's contest. Best wishes, KC
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February 8, 2011 at 9:00 AM
Congratulation on your well-deserved win in Michael's contest, Sasha. Best wishes, Carolyn
Edl Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 8:55 AM
Thank you all for the comments! :D I'm so happy to have won the contest <33
Richards Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 8:24 AM
Wonderful haiku, and a well deserved winner! Congratulations, Sasha!!
Guzzi Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 7:15 AM
congrad's! go sun!!! Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 7:06 AM
Great descriptive Haiku..Congratulations..Sara
Mehta Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 6:42 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Sasha
Sweetheart Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 4:34 AM
Congrats Sasha on your first place in the Haiku from your window contest ... a wonderful write and win so enjoy with luv..
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February 8, 2011 at 2:58 AM
Congratulations on winning with this entry.
Sutherland Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 11:12 AM
Gorgeous Haiku Sasha!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 11:05 AM
Wonderful imagery Sasha and good luck if entered in Michael's new contest luv... great contender ... happy Sunday with luv..
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