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Ice Cream Sundae

Ice cream sundae on our steamy honeymoon Strawberries on top Hell! we don’t need no spoon Shared between our Tongues salves those shrivelled prunes God! she’s one sweet Dish and it’s still only Afternoon I scream Sunday! on this torrid day in June Ice Cream Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward 06/22/22

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Susan Ashley

Date: 7/13/2022 7:13:00 AM

Dear David, such a sensual sundae and Sunday! I especially adored; “God! She’s one sweet dish / and it’s still only afternoon” - oh seductive rapture!! Love your use of the monorhyme too! A creative and luscious poem. A winner for me! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/13/2022 8:26:00 AM

Heya Susan, thank you so much for seeing the playful side of my poem about a couple of newlyweds, enjoying a sweet honeymoon in the sun, alas it was all too much for the contest sponsor, and got the axe for it’s salacity content, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/12/2022 8:00:00 PM

Behave Dave, you know the drill! It is you who spoiled us with your shameless audacious dish! I admire your mojo.

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/12/2022 9:21:00 PM

Heya Anaya, I really thought the freshly attained marriage license would allow a little mojo fun with the strawberry sundae, but upon reflection it was done in achingly bad taste, cheers David

David Mchattie

Date: 6/22/2022 2:06:00 PM

Getting a little steamy. Don't let a little brain freeze spoil the mood. Cute stuff my friend.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/22/2022 2:17:00 PM

Thank you David, no time for sightseeing on our honeymoon, we was much too busy, I’m sure you get the idea, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/22/2022 1:43:00 PM

Phew, you've raised the temperature with this one David, best of luck. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/22/2022 2:13:00 PM

Honeymoon’s, ice cream and cold showers Tom, I remember the Algarve pretty well lol, cheers David