David Kavanagh Poet Rhyme

Ice Cream Sundae

Ice cream sundae
on our steamy honeymoon

Strawberries on top
Hell! we don’t need no spoon
Shared between our Tongues
salves those shrivelled prunes
God! she’s one sweet Dish
and it’s still only Afternoon 

I scream Sunday!
on this torrid day in June 


Ice Cream Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Julia Ward
06/22/22

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Susan Ashley July 13, 2022 at 7:13 AM Dear David, such a sensual sundae and Sunday! I especially adored; “God! She’s one sweet dish / and it’s still only afternoon” - oh seductive rapture!! Love your use of the monorhyme too! A creative and luscious poem. A winner for me! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan David Kavanagh July 13, 2022 at 8:26 AM Heya Susan, thank you so much for seeing the playful side of my poem about a couple of newlyweds, enjoying a sweet honeymoon in the sun, alas it was all too much for the contest sponsor, and got the axe for it’s salacity content, cheers David

I Am Anaya July 12, 2022 at 8:00 PM Behave Dave, you know the drill! It is you who spoiled us with your shameless audacious dish! I admire your mojo. David Kavanagh July 12, 2022 at 9:21 PM Heya Anaya, I really thought the freshly attained marriage license would allow a little mojo fun with the strawberry sundae, but upon reflection it was done in achingly bad taste, cheers David

David Mchattie June 22, 2022 at 2:06 PM Getting a little steamy. Don't let a little brain freeze spoil the mood. Cute stuff my friend. David Kavanagh June 22, 2022 at 2:17 PM Thank you David, no time for sightseeing on our honeymoon, we was much too busy, I’m sure you get the idea, cheers David

Tom Cunningham June 22, 2022 at 1:43 PM Phew, you've raised the temperature with this one David, best of luck. Tom David Kavanagh June 22, 2022 at 2:13 PM Honeymoon’s, ice cream and cold showers Tom, I remember the Algarve pretty well lol, cheers David