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Ice Cream Cake

The scrumptious smell of chocolate,
With sticky whip cream and cherry at top
Touches my lip and makes my eyes swirl,
Its choco flavor melts in my mouth.
A frozen cake coated with ice cream.
An oozing lava on its side,
A unique texture that drops in my tongue,
Only makes me want to ask for more.
Eyes are closed when chewing the nuts
A heavenly taste that keeps me in touch.
I could eat this cold dessert every day.
This ice cream cake is so rare to taste.


October 28, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Hay Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 3:27 PM
Yummy poem, well done!
Strauss Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 11:39 PM
Hello Poets! I just want to say I'm well delighted to read your comments! Thank you
Inman Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 10:51 PM
Lei, I'm having a sugar overload. Nice write.
A. Sharma Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 10:27 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Lei!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 8:13 PM
Lei, I like how you describe this one!!! I could imagine you relaxing and just savoring each spoonful til the drops of this ice cream cake... ! BIG CONGRATULATIONS!~Olive Eloisa =`)
Strauss Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 11:40 PM
Hi Olive! Thanks for placing me on your contest... I appreciate it
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 5:02 PM
Ice cream cake is so unique. WEll done and congrats on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 3:34 PM
Ahh!! Melt in your mouth goodness!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
A  Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 2:56 PM
Lei, congratulations. SKAT
Allison Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 1:38 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 12:40 PM
MMMmmmm...Wonderful write, Lei, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Lane Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 8:38 AM
Well done, Lei. Congratulations.
Pettit Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 6:21 PM
This is high calorie poetry. I feel full just by reading this very descriptive piece.
Strauss Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 6:24 PM
It makes me want to eat some Robert
Allison Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 11:31 AM
mmm sounds delicious Lei:-) hugs jan xx
Strauss Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Oh!!! Eating ice cream cake is like heaven Jan lol
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