Ice Cream


Cold and icy sugar treat,
freezes my palate.
I’ll bite the end off my cone,
suck out liquid-freeze;
ice cream headache slaps;
bitter sweet
joy!

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Funom Makama

July 22, 2017 at 11:56 AM

well crafted into an eye-romancing beauty... Your lines and words are just lovely... Its nice visiting one of your pages again..

Dale Gregory Cozart

July 21, 2017 at 4:43 PM

It's called, 'brain freeze'. Oh sure, it tastes good at the time, but you suffer for it afterwards. Although, might I suggest the Pralines-n-Cream with hot butterscotch sauce?

M. L. Kiser

July 21, 2017 at 9:24 PM

Yep brain-freeze; you do suffer after that. Thanks for stopping to read and comment.