Ice Cream

Cold and icy sugar treat, freezes my palate. I’ll bite the end off my cone, suck out liquid-freeze; ice cream headache slaps; bitter sweet joy!

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/22/2017 11:56:00 AM

well crafted into an eye-romancing beauty... Your lines and words are just lovely... Its nice visiting one of your pages again..

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 7/21/2017 4:43:00 PM

It's called, 'brain freeze'. Oh sure, it tastes good at the time, but you suffer for it afterwards. Although, might I suggest the Pralines-n-Cream with hot butterscotch sauce?

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/21/2017 9:24:00 PM

Yep brain-freeze; you do suffer after that. Thanks for stopping to read and comment.

Lin Lane
Date: 7/21/2017 4:46:00 PM

oh yummy Dale.

Lin Lane

Date: 7/21/2017 3:37:00 PM

I'll have a hot fudge sundae, please and another read of your poem ;-)...You made my sweet tooth ache!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/21/2017 4:07:00 PM

I hope it isn't aching too badly; thanks again.

Tim Smith

Date: 7/21/2017 3:27:00 PM

I need a cone ...delicious

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/21/2017 4:07:00 PM

Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/21/2017 2:56:00 PM

mmmm delicious ...I fancy an ice cream NOW:-) hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/21/2017 3:14:00 PM

Yep, it's pretty hot here, this week; it does hit the spot when the temps. top 100 deg. Thanks for stopping by.