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Ice Cold

She had a smile that captured The very essence of you Sweet and soft words A Latina who descended from the heavens Her sweet voice would melt you Till you become the water around her Then it dawned on you She was as cold as ice Her white dress became black Her beauty became her sword She swiftly cut open your heart Your blood flowed onto her Crimson red Queen She who devoured you Your soul now empty Her heart still Cold as ICE Her smile forever frozen upon the tomb of your heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/6/2014 3:57:00 AM
I know this woman says every guy whose heart is broken into pieces.... Great one Arthur
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/19/2014 9:53:00 PM
LOL Tim yes I think we all dated her!!!!
Date: 7/6/2014 3:50:00 AM
Great write. You captured the Ice Queen well. If for contest, you will do well, indeed.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/19/2014 9:52:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, always such a pleasure to see your smile!!!!
Date: 7/6/2014 12:37:00 AM
Oooh. I know folks like that, someday they will be burned with the truth. Great imagery Arthur!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/6/2014 12:38:00 AM
Thank you! I had fun with this one!!!!

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