Ice Cold

She had a smile that captured
The very essence of you
Sweet and soft words
A Latina who descended from the heavens

Her sweet voice would melt you
Till you become the water around her
Then it dawned on you
She was as cold as ice

Her white dress became black
Her beauty became her sword
She swiftly cut open your heart
Your blood flowed onto her

Crimson red Queen
She who devoured you
Your soul now empty
Her heart still Cold as ICE

Her smile forever frozen upon the tomb of your heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 3:57 AM
I know this woman says every guy whose heart is broken into pieces.... Great one Arthur
Vaso Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 9:53 PM
LOL Tim yes I think we all dated her!!!!
Manassian Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 3:50 AM
Great write. You captured the Ice Queen well. If for contest, you will do well, indeed.
Vaso Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 9:52 PM
Thanks Eileen, always such a pleasure to see your smile!!!!
Rivenbark Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 12:37 AM
Oooh. I know folks like that, someday they will be burned with the truth. Great imagery Arthur!
Vaso Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 12:38 AM
Thank you! I had fun with this one!!!!
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