Ice Carnival

As every winter evening falls,
in a sheer cloak, thin as a shade,
a herald of ice dreams calls
and starts to lead a parade.
The winter spirit plays
with his bitter ice whiff.
And freezes the old way
into a picture, icily stiff.
Bells of an old Cathedral
cleave the deafness on the street.
Dancing in a big ice hall,
pellucid butterflies compete.
They slide on the ice
of a frozen looking-glass,
telling stories to entice,
drawing a carnival mask.
It lulls to sleep the eyes,
watching through it's face
and holds them very tight
into an everlasting embrace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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artlyy Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 7:28 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
March 29, 2024 at 7:55 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 1:59 AM
VESELA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 7:07 AM
Versela,, awesome write! I enjoyed reading this poem. Skat
Hristozova Avatar
November 9, 2009 at 3:49 PM
I appreciate your kind words, Elaine.
George   Avatar
November 9, 2009 at 11:16 AM
Beautiful,Vesela. Welcome to the soup. I look forward to reading more of your writing. Lainie
Hristozova Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 5:17 AM
Thank you, John and Jim for the kind words.
Fish Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 9:51 PM
Nice work here, Vesela! Welcome to Poety Soup and hope you find a comfortable place to snuggle up in here amongst a very eclectic collection of poets. We come in all varities here. We'll be crossing trails again, I'm sure. ~<><
Freeman Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 9:58 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup, Good start in this poem, Sincerely. Moses
Hristozova Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 5:57 AM
Thank you, Carol
Brown Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 5:37 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Vesela. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Hristozova Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 5:20 AM
thank you
Kendrick Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 4:52 AM
Very descriptive write. Keep writing. Sara
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