Icarus Plunge

Becoming a shadow puppet
How many friends can I scare away today?
Praying won't redeem my strife
That cannonball lodged in my chest
Doesn't excuse my arrogance

Covetous infant so flirty
Retched tongue flapping filthy
As if I deserve you
Or your love

Lightning cracks my skull
In a bolt of shame
That dented door
Conceals the trap beneath
Begging me to fall

Your light so infectious
Compels me with wonderment
I clutch at the mist
When I should be basking

My forked hiss
Proves a betrayal
Of all the hope I've discovered
Within your dancing eyes
The galaxies sing

If the angel of our dream
Takes flight from sight
My sorrow shall linger
From my own contempt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Loveless Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 9:19 AM
Sad. But beautiful John!
Moreno Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 12:35 PM
You have a strength for opening line and powerful descriptive line. 'Lightning cracks my skull In a bolt of shame' nice line...Raul
Gass Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 7:51 PM
I love the title! The strong emotions blended with your excellent phrasing and great imagery make this a wonderful piece of poetry! Awesome write, John! Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Love, Robin
Payne Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 10:25 AM
wow this was a beautiful piece, though sad it was wonderful. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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