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I Write To You Now

My dear lovely darling, I write to you now Things are not as they were somehow So many good things we had before And now they are not there any more I tried to explain how I felt today But what I said was not heeded no way Nothing is more important to me Than you my darling can’t you see No matter what I may say or do I know that I will always love you

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/2/2010 4:34:00 AM

Beautiful sentiments, Pam! I hope your darling is worth your love for him. Thank you for your comments and have a nice week...Gert

Billy Thekidster

Date: 11/22/2009 2:20:00 PM

Beautifully expressed purist of thought. I'm sure your darling loves you too. How can one not. Beautifully written Pamela. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Elaine George

Date: 11/20/2009 11:57:00 AM

Sentimentally beautiful. Thank you for sharing, Pamela. Love, Lainie

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/17/2009 1:07:00 PM

what do i want for Christmas? a woman with an attitude like this one. please Santa?jhl

P P

Date: 11/17/2009 5:14:00 AM

Good Talk'

Ts Lewis

Date: 11/16/2009 6:14:00 AM

I hope your darling understands where your coming from. The last line says it all. Very touching peice.

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/15/2009 8:27:00 PM

So wonderful! A sweet message to any loved one... written for everyone :)

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/15/2009 7:08:00 PM

That is very nice and don't let him forget that. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Love and Blessings, Caroline.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2009 3:42:00 AM

Love that loves even though the other one has their bad points. That is the way it is with us and God. He loves us even when we are bad. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 11/15/2009 12:22:00 AM

Than you for supporting my contest Pamela.Rgds Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/14/2009 9:01:00 PM

Sweet words, Pam, hope u entered in the My Dear Contest posted... enjoyed .. your comments are uplifting.. thankxxx... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"