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Tiptoeing towards the edge of the towering cliff I flap my wounded wings and fly over tall two hundred year old oak trees up to the top of the highest of mountains scanning a never ending sovereign sky I glide effortlessly in the strong southern trade winds watching the fawn and her doe in the wilderness My heart starts to beat, and I write I write of the fragrant fancy free daisies growing unrestrained of the sun smiling down reflecting in the fast flowing babbling brook of the doe munching on the savory green and yellow grasses oblivious to her surroundings , the fawn firmly within her sight I hear the songs coming from the red breasted baby Robin calling to her mother wondering when she'll return with dinner my heart beats lovingly and I write I soar higher and higher heading for the heavens past the mammoth yellowish orange coloured moon through the mysteries of the milky way all along thinking of the mysteries lying inside you I open my eyes, imagine I'm with you and I write
06/01/2015

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Date: 9/7/2016 3:49:00 PM
Yes Tim your poem is breathtaking!You are in my favourites.
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Date: 7/19/2016 9:09:00 PM
Tim, your poem is breathtaking! Going in my favs. Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings!
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Date: 7/18/2016 10:41:00 AM
Congrats on your superb win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/16/2016 3:49:00 PM
This is taking my mind to a wonderful place, where peace, and beauty surround. Thank you for the journey !! Congratulations, Tim!
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Date: 7/16/2016 3:35:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Tim! This had no problem flying high to the top of the winners' list! Congratulations! // paul
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Date: 7/16/2016 2:04:00 PM
Tim, just beautiful..congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 7/6/2016 7:11:00 AM
Greetings Tim. Congrats for your well deserved, first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/5/2016 3:25:00 PM
How beautiful this is !! No wonder it sailed to the top !!! Congratulations on a well deserved win !!
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Date: 7/5/2016 11:41:00 AM
I can imagine flying reading your write. Excellent. Congrats on your win. :)
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Date: 7/5/2016 9:44:00 AM
Very beautiful with awesome imagery, Tim. Congratulations on your Trophy First Place win! 7 Sandra
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Date: 7/4/2016 9:39:00 PM
Happy 4th of July, TIM, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for checking out my blog. ((it was a deep and steep read. The ending was the icing on it all)) LINDA
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Date: 6/29/2015 4:48:00 AM
Congrats, Tim. This poem is very perceptive and wonderfully crafted.
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Date: 6/28/2015 11:59:00 AM
What a beauty!
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Date: 6/17/2015 9:08:00 AM
Tim, this poem transports. Multitasking as you write. I'm drawn to "I open my eyes, imagine I'm with you and I write."
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Date: 6/13/2015 8:39:00 PM
Beautiful visuals in this write. Congrats on POTW, Tim.
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Date: 6/13/2015 4:49:00 PM
Beautiful. Keep writing!
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Date: 6/12/2015 10:09:00 PM
Congrats on an awesome poem and poem of the week, rock on! :)
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Date: 6/12/2015 9:29:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again Tim. Check out my group poem. I would love you to add some words!
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Date: 6/11/2015 9:58:00 AM
Hey Tim, this amazing work is very deserving of your most recent honor of POFW!!!
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Date: 6/11/2015 12:47:00 AM
Congratulations on having your wonderful poem selected for POTW Tim! 7
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Date: 6/10/2015 6:23:00 PM
Congrats on getting the poem of the week!)Alexis
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Date: 6/10/2015 6:26:00 PM
Thank you Alexis....have a blessed night
Date: 6/10/2015 11:20:00 AM
Excellent poem Tim. I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 6/10/2015 11:19:00 AM
Excellent poem Tim. I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 6/10/2015 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Gavin
Date: 6/9/2015 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on Poem of The Week...Big 7
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Date: 6/9/2015 7:12:00 PM
Thanks Judy....no luck on that picture yet....could be at my ex's....haven't seen it in years
Date: 6/8/2015 6:29:00 PM
Tim congratulations on poem of the week with this beautiful poem
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Date: 6/9/2015 7:10:00 PM
Thank you Constance....have a blessed week Tim
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