I Would Take a Bullet

My love for you is true and has no bounds,
you are my friend, my life, you are my rock,
I adore your voice your melodic sounds,
even when you sneer and angrily mock,

when you need me I will always be there,
without you I would be nothing at all,
your the only one in my life I share,
when I'm in trouble your the one I call,

how or where we live has no consequence,
as long as we're together, we both care,
whether  rich or poor makes no difference,
no one can take what we've got, we're a pair,

your hurting so am I, I will show it,
for you I will always take a bullet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/26/2017 5:20:00 PM
I consider this poem to be a love poem. it is the way I see it. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 10/27/2017 11:52:00 AM
Darlene you are correct, this is about unconditional love. thanks again for your support my dear friend. :))
Date: 10/19/2017 6:52:00 PM
Roy: "10 cents worth of lead to the back of the head" wouldn't be a fair "pain" exchange for my honey's 57 yrs of putting up with me. :o) Thanks for sharing that lovely thought with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Date: 10/27/2017 11:49:00 AM
Thanks old buck, I'm sure your better half thinks your the best thing ever, thanks again for your support. :))
Date: 10/12/2017 7:44:00 AM
Wow! This is what I call unconditional love for a friend! Great poem.
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Date: 10/12/2017 8:37:00 AM
Hi Gayle, thank you so much for your very kind comment, my best friend is my partner of thirty years and I would protect her in any way I could, this is where I got the inspiration for this poem, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
Date: 10/6/2017 2:11:00 PM
Lovely poem Roy, this literally happened in Las Vegas, people were taking a bullet for their family and friends, they say they weren't heroes, and I agree, it's what true love does, it is self-sacrificing. So refreshing to see someone that has true values, eternal principles of love. Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 10/8/2017 3:15:00 AM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment and congratulations, I also totally agree with the sentiments within your comment, thanks again for your support.
Date: 9/26/2017 5:15:00 PM
Very touching and beautiful.
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Date: 9/27/2017 2:57:00 PM
Thank you very much Bhavini for your very kind comment much appreciated. :))
Date: 9/26/2017 4:03:00 AM
The epitome of unconditional love Roy - many congrats on POTD - its odd I commented on this yesterday but the comment doesn't show:-(hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/26/2017 6:56:00 AM
Jan I never envisaged achieving POTD and feel honoured that something that I have written has been recognised as being good enough, I think my ability to write something worthy is down to the amazing poets on PS that guide me and encourage me, so thank you and all the wonderful poets. :))))
Date: 9/26/2017 12:49:00 AM
Very sweet and romantic poem :)
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Date: 9/26/2017 6:48:00 AM
Hi James, thank you very much for your very kind comment, really appreciated. :)))
Date: 9/25/2017 10:46:00 AM
Love this beautiful loving sonnet, Roy, congratulations on POTD ~`*
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Date: 9/26/2017 6:46:00 AM
Eve, I feel honoured that you liked my poem, thank you very much for your very kind comment and congratulations, much appreciated and welcome. :)))
Date: 9/25/2017 9:11:00 AM
A wonderful expression of true and unconditional love congrats on POTD well deserved to be sure.
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Date: 9/26/2017 6:43:00 AM
Thank you very much Edward, so pleased you liked this, your very kind comment and congratulations are really appreciated. :)))
Date: 9/25/2017 6:13:00 AM
Back with congrats on your POTD honors!
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Date: 9/26/2017 6:37:00 AM
Thanks Vijay you are very kind. :))
Date: 9/25/2017 5:46:00 AM
I love the love in this love poem Roy :) and lovely to see it bestowed with potd honours! Congratulations and a wonderful day to you! xomo
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Date: 9/26/2017 6:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Maureen, your very kind comment and your best wishes are much appreciated and very welcome. :))
Date: 9/25/2017 5:14:00 AM
- What a lovely poem, Roy - Congratulations ; p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/25/2017 5:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise, I'm so pleased that you liked this and it achieving POTD. :)))
Date: 9/25/2017 2:33:00 AM
True Love, what a lovely write.Congrats on POTD, so well deserved....Mariia
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Date: 9/25/2017 3:24:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Maria, I find it hard to believe that something that I have written has actually achieved POTD so pleased, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))))
Date: 9/24/2017 7:15:00 AM
Ahh true love Roy.
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Date: 9/24/2017 10:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Elizabeth, true love exactly, I am also longing to read another of your delightful poems soon, thanks again for your support. :))
Date: 9/23/2017 8:40:00 PM
Beautiful poem-- well thought-- full of emotion-- thank you for this moving piece Roy!
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Date: 9/24/2017 10:15:00 AM
Hi Pailey and thank you so much for your very kind comment, so pleased you liked this, thanks again for your support. :))
Date: 9/23/2017 7:10:00 PM
Such a loving tribute to love--quite moving to read--full of emotions--feelings well depicted, Roy!
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Date: 9/24/2017 10:14:00 AM
Thank you very much Vijay, your comment means I have realised my intension, so pleased you liked this. :))
Date: 9/23/2017 6:49:00 PM
Roy, such heartfelt emotion beautifully penned. Your sincere sentiments are so endearing, lovely and strong. An awesome write that i totally enjoyed this evening! :)
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Date: 9/23/2017 6:58:00 PM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment Susan, Your support and encouragement is really appreciated. :))
Date: 9/23/2017 6:31:00 PM
I love this Roy. This is a genuine poem, so meaningful. It is true, when love is authentic, one would take a bullet for another. Well done!! :)
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Date: 9/23/2017 6:43:00 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Heidi, so pleased you liked this, I hope that I would do anything for my loved ones, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
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