I Would Take a Bullet

My love for you is true and has no bounds,
you are my friend, my life, you are my rock,
I adore your voice your melodic sounds,
even when you sneer and angrily mock,

when you need me I will always be there,
without you I would be nothing at all,
your the only one in my life I share,
when I'm in trouble your the one I call,

how or where we live has no consequence,
as long as we're together, we both care,
whether  rich or poor makes no difference,
no one can take what we've got, we're a pair,

your hurting so am I, I will show it,
for you I will always take a bullet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 5:20 PM
I consider this poem to be a love poem. it is the way I see it. Have a nice evening my friend.
Pett Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Darlene you are correct, this is about unconditional love. thanks again for your support my dear friend. :))
Buck Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 6:52 PM
Roy: "10 cents worth of lead to the back of the head" wouldn't be a fair "pain" exchange for my honey's 57 yrs of putting up with me. :o) Thanks for sharing that lovely thought with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck
Pett Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 11:49 AM
Thanks old buck, I'm sure your better half thinks your the best thing ever, thanks again for your support. :))
Rodd Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Wow! This is what I call unconditional love for a friend! Great poem.
Pett Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 8:37 AM
Hi Gayle, thank you so much for your very kind comment, my best friend is my partner of thirty years and I would protect her in any way I could, this is where I got the inspiration for this poem, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
Hamilton Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 2:11 PM
Lovely poem Roy, this literally happened in Las Vegas, people were taking a bullet for their family and friends, they say they weren't heroes, and I agree, it's what true love does, it is self-sacrificing. So refreshing to see someone that has true values, eternal principles of love. Congrats on POTD!
Pett Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 3:15 AM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment and congratulations, I also totally agree with the sentiments within your comment, thanks again for your support.
Cee Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 5:15 PM
Very touching and beautiful.
Pett Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 2:57 PM
Thank you very much Bhavini for your very kind comment much appreciated. :))
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 4:03 AM
The epitome of unconditional love Roy - many congrats on POTD - its odd I commented on this yesterday but the comment doesn't show:-(hugs jan xx
Pett Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 6:56 AM
Jan I never envisaged achieving POTD and feel honoured that something that I have written has been recognised as being good enough, I think my ability to write something worthy is down to the amazing poets on PS that guide me and encourage me, so thank you and all the wonderful poets. :))))
Moon Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 12:49 AM
Very sweet and romantic poem :)
Pett Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 6:48 AM
Hi James, thank you very much for your very kind comment, really appreciated. :)))
Roper Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 10:46 AM
Love this beautiful loving sonnet, Roy, congratulations on POTD ~`*
Pett Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 6:46 AM
Eve, I feel honoured that you liked my poem, thank you very much for your very kind comment and congratulations, much appreciated and welcome. :)))
Mccall Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 9:11 AM
A wonderful expression of true and unconditional love congrats on POTD well deserved to be sure.
Pett Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 6:43 AM
Thank you very much Edward, so pleased you liked this, your very kind comment and congratulations are really appreciated. :)))
Pandit Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 6:13 AM
Back with congrats on your POTD honors!
Pett Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 6:37 AM
Thanks Vijay you are very kind. :))
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 5:46 AM
I love the love in this love poem Roy :) and lovely to see it bestowed with potd honours! Congratulations and a wonderful day to you! xomo
Pett Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 6:36 AM
Thank you so much Maureen, your very kind comment and your best wishes are much appreciated and very welcome. :))
Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 5:14 AM
- What a lovely poem, Roy - Congratulations ; p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pett Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 5:27 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise, I'm so pleased that you liked this and it achieving POTD. :)))
Williams Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 2:33 AM
True Love, what a lovely write.Congrats on POTD, so well deserved....Mariia
Pett Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 3:24 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Maria, I find it hard to believe that something that I have written has actually achieved POTD so pleased, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))))
Kinch  Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 7:15 AM
Ahh true love Roy.
Pett Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 10:19 AM
Thank you so much Elizabeth, true love exactly, I am also longing to read another of your delightful poems soon, thanks again for your support. :))
Gordon Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 8:40 PM
Beautiful poem-- well thought-- full of emotion-- thank you for this moving piece Roy!
Pett Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 10:15 AM
Hi Pailey and thank you so much for your very kind comment, so pleased you liked this, thanks again for your support. :))
Pandit Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 7:10 PM
Such a loving tribute to love--quite moving to read--full of emotions--feelings well depicted, Roy!
Pett Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 10:14 AM
Thank you very much Vijay, your comment means I have realised my intension, so pleased you liked this. :))
Ashley Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 6:49 PM
Roy, such heartfelt emotion beautifully penned. Your sincere sentiments are so endearing, lovely and strong. An awesome write that i totally enjoyed this evening! :)
Pett Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 6:58 PM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment Susan, Your support and encouragement is really appreciated. :))
Sands Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 6:31 PM
I love this Roy. This is a genuine poem, so meaningful. It is true, when love is authentic, one would take a bullet for another. Well done!! :)
Pett Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 6:43 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Heidi, so pleased you liked this, I hope that I would do anything for my loved ones, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
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