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I Would Have Loved You In a Different Life

I would have loved you in a different life. No I am sorry I meant I would have loved you right. you were everything I could have dreamed of. I did not want to believe it but I was in love. But, how could I have been I treated you so bad. Not realizing the magic that we had. You were my best friend turned love but, that was not enough. I handled your heart entirely to rough. The crazy part is most of the terrible things I did, you didn't even know; and I didn't feel the effects of the self caused damage until you let me go. In a very short time you became my everything but, then my everything walked away. You left so fast that I couldn't tell you what I wanted to say. Things like I love you, I'm sorry, and, please don't let me go. You meant the world to me I just though that you should know. I guess it was the timing because I could have loved you In a different life. No I am sorry I meant I could have love you right. Now I only love you in my dreams. The brightest part of my memories, like a big beautiful beam.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/30/2016 8:52:00 AM
My first visit to your house. Read all your PO's top to bottom. My fave is "Black Coffee." All of them, really. I like how you write and how you tell the story. I hope you keep waking up in the night to write for a long time! (ps. I hope you get a nap too;-) cheerios! ~john
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Britney Kimbrough
Date: 12/2/2016 7:23:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 7/8/2016 8:02:00 AM
Aww it's so cute.
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Date: 6/30/2016 5:32:00 AM
Can't open your heart unless it's been broken...Rumi Poetry that comes from the heart are always the best to read.
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Date: 6/27/2016 9:29:00 PM
Britney, Awesome first post, You must be an accomplished writer. Hope to see you FLOURISH among this rock-solid community of amateur poets. You are going to love it here. Fast;) Linda
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Britney Kimbrough
Date: 6/27/2016 9:42:00 PM
Thanks but I am not...just someone who was in love once
Date: 6/27/2016 8:05:00 PM
welcome to poetry soup, Britney,, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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Britney Kimbrough
Date: 6/27/2016 9:43:00 PM
Thank you

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