I Wonder How It Will Be

I wonder how it will be ,
The silence as it echoes,
The waves slapping the ground,
The cold breeze dancing all around,
The trees as they whooshed and talked,
The Sun as it stitched a golden horizon,
Finally retiring from it's monotonous job.

What a magical moment it will be,
As an instinctive smile creeps within.
When stress and pressure be replaced,
By satisfaction and glee,
I wish I could experience this daily. 

5/8/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 2/1/2023 2:21:00 PM
And, i, too, have discovered your poetry here in this poem of rich imagery. I’ m now a follower. Blessings to you. sally
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 2/2/2023 12:03:00 AM
I am so glad to find you here Sally... Glad you liked my poem! Have a great day! :) And also thank you for the follow I will surely read your poems too but currently I'm in the middle of my exams !
Date: 8/9/2022 1:33:00 PM
I'm so glad I found you in this lovely poem, Komal. The imagery is beautifully expressive as if nature HIM/HERself is speaking directly through you. Well written & "Write on," Terry
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 8/10/2022 3:02:00 AM
Thank you Terrell for commenting on my poem! Glad you stopped by here! Yes nature creates magical things! :)
Date: 8/8/2022 3:24:00 PM
It would be nice. Something to think about my friend. I like your poem, the imagery made it fun to read. Hugs, Bill
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 8/9/2022 2:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Bill, glad you liked it! Yes it would be nice... Hope you are doing great!:)
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