-I Wonder

Sometimes I just wonder
Wonder about it all
Feel disillusioned 
Feel insignificant and small

Sometimes I just wonder
What is it really meant to be?
Often overwhelmed 
By the total enormity
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Volumes Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 3:52 PM
Like a single drip of water in the ocean of life, will we, can we, did we make a difference? Thought provoking poem Deb, well written.
Baker Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 3:30 PM
This world can be quite overwhelming, especially the pesent. I usually feel very small and insignificant, and at other times I feel good to be a part of something so wonderful as creation. Enjoyed the read my dear friend. Hugs, Bill
Hawkins Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 8:08 PM
Good one, Deb, Twinkle, Twinkle, little star. Take care, Shirley X ,
Kendrick Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 12:01 PM
Yes, I completely understand those last two lines now. Not knowing is hard but knowing the One Who can handle it all is what I am depending upon. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my blog. Sara
Gasun Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 5:33 AM
I can relate here my dear friend Deb. A well-crafted rhyme which I enjoyed reading this evening. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always my dear friend. Hugs
Gentile Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 4:53 AM
Thought shared by many! Deb you really captured the essence of the wonder of life ! So well put!! Happy Tuesday xxoo
Legros Kelley Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 6:32 PM
Wow Deb, you and me too. This is perfectly penned. God bless you.
Sangster - K Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 8:30 PM
Hi Deb, I can identify there. I also have those days. Cheers my friend :-)
Anaya Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 12:45 PM
The enormities too many to mention. I have those thoughts, especially at nighttime! Great thought of the day, Deb M.! (My caption code was DEB) xo
Cunningham Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 10:05 AM
I sometimes wonder too when you realise how vast the universe is, we are but mere specks in the grand scheme of things. Tom
Tor Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 2:47 AM
Great question to ask Deb. Thanks for sharing.
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